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TAW
Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?
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sucks
fake and gay
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what the fuck bro
why you gotta be a hater? L&T bronie!
that's my review
shithole fag
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uh why are you talking about yourself on my story fag
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im gonna ban u
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if you ban me I'll just come back stronger than ever before
the fighting begins... again... hopefully resolves in love again.
Hey, why are your descriptions always hypothetical insight?
...well why the fuck not?
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I'm not gonna lie: I enjoyed it and for this story you deserve one coffee drinking Godot!
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Poultron... TAW... The endless arguments between the two of you on all of these fic's was funny the first time, but just mean-spirited forever after
. I agree with TAW, love and tolerance. 
Of course, there is a high probability that this is all a joke that you two enjoy playing, but I was too stupid to catch that if it's the case. *insert shrugpony*
Anyway, YAY, another TAW story!
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come on bronies, love and tolerance xDxDxD
Normally I'm not much for any type of bondage, but I quite enjoyed this one. So I say nice work TAW, I'm excited for your next work.
good shit TAW you dont disapoint
And once again you make me lol awesome work!
347206 347242 You know you are on to something when you two arguing is better than the story itself,
Twilight and bondage. ....I like this combination.
Shit to anypony who says TAW is a bad writer
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does it count if I say it?
360481 No, you don't get a say in this!
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dang :(
Human on mare bondage action...
I...
Damnit.
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Bondage never was my style, but Twilight is, so it all works out in the end...
Human x Pony? 29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lw6ez4m8lM1qf5z5eo1_500.gif
This story was very well writen, very well writen indeed. Also the fact that one of the... protagonists is a human is kind of downplayed. Not a bad thing, just something I noticed.
Y U WRITE SO WELL?!?!
I can't stop reading your work!
Gorgeous isn't a noun, it's an adjective.
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um...
I uh...
um...
whoops.
Buckin awesome. Screw poultron! TAW you're an amazing writer. I love human x pony
It was ok... that is, when you weren't inadvertently insulting my intelligence... and making twilight out to be so condescending (which hints at a lack of the fundamental respect needed in a healthy relationship)... and... well I could go on but the point is that you made the reader seem immature which, when projected on someone who fancies himself an intellectual, it really irritates them. Just take what the two beings love in their partner into account next time and try to make sure there isn't any big conflicts as well as ensuring their aren't to many small ones. The biggest elements of love are personal needs (and whether or not they are met), memories, and current respect.
I think I'm going to start making blogs on things like this...
Link promised: http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/29072
Copypasta or highlight then right click and open that way!
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Are you implying that Twilight doesn't respect her friends? She's just as--if not more--condescending all the time. It's just part of who she is, she doesn't mean anything bad by it she just honestly thinks she knows better. If you can't deal with that, then you're right, the relationship couldn't work.
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I tend to see her act more explanatory than condescending. condescending is usually seen when she thinks someone is doing something pretty stupid after already having explained the first time.
Twilight sighed. "It's a beautiful depiction of an intimate moment! Fine, maybe you just need something a bit less subtle. Pf, stallions."
In this, she reads some poetry and then instead of finding it slightly endearing and gentally explaining it (like I figured she would, she tends to be this nice to her friends most the time), she implies that the reader would have to be an idiot not to understand.
"Oh, come on! Does she have to spell it out for you?" Twilight protested, seeming almost insulted that you'd called the millennia old text vague, "it's quite explicitly about submission! I'd say you only think with one thing, but I think that'd actually help here."
it's even worse here. At this moment in time, she is lacking some respect, yes.
The only thing that keeps this from being a negative encounter is some obviously already strong feelings for each other and the sex itself being good. If she were to act this way on a regular basis then ya, the lack of respect would eventually wear the relationship down and cause problems.
As far as you making the reader somewhat stupid (how did he not make the connection that it was a scene being acted out? The number of body movements and physical descriptions were a dead give away!), I'm guessing it was some amazing stroke of luck and possibly twilight indulging in her shallow side a bit more than usual.
Once you get past those and few other minor issues and oddities, the clop was great. The clip was a slightly unexpected twist when it started acting up and fit the "story" well and you were pretty descriptive so good marks there. Just trying to let you know of little things that personally annoyed me.
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Fixed...
wait, why did I fix this extremely old post?
Though I suppose "genitally" explaining it would have gotten the point across just as well, don't you think?
346957 STOP BEING A HATER IF YOU DIDN'T LIKE HIS FAN FICTIONS THEN DON'T READ THEM AND AND STFU ALSO FLUTTERSHY AND FRIENDS DO NOT APPROVE!!!!
Books can stop loneliness
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instead of finding it slightly endearing and genitally
endearing and genitally
genitally
Whoops?
... and the point was utterly lost on me, there. :D