• Published 22nd Jun 2014
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Thinking Inside the Box - Ireyah



Some simple, dirty clop, ponies and humans in a glory-hole box!

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I'm Anonymous Pegasus and I approve of his message! :pinkiecrazy:

I love that I inspired this, but I just couldn't get into this, myself. :applejackunsure: I really don't like horse anatomy, and any reference to 'winking' is a huge turn-off to me. And the rest of it was just too dirty for my (admittedly rather vanilla) tastes.

Otherwise, it was well-written. :twilightsmile: Just not my cup of tea.

4586038 Shame you don't like it so much sweetheart, but I still love you anyway :twilightsmile:

This story is derpy approved :derpytongue2:

Hmm...
Interesting, interesting.
Will read later when I have some free time.

I came buckets 10/10 would do/read/fap again:pinkiehappy:

Okay, so Caramel's bi then, and these are in continuity. That's good to know. [/sincerity]
But, uh.... Would it then be entirely out of the question to have a giant orgy between all of the ponies (and one human) that have been in these chapters, once you reach the end of this.

the picture itself drew me to throw a thumbs up at this story :) lol

The cervix bit kind of killed this chapter a bit for me, but all in all a well-written story.

i loved all ove it:heart::heart:

4587708 My feelings exactly :raritywink:

4592971 Sorry you feel that way, sweetheart, but I'm a girl that loves to get someone, or something, that deep. Couldn't help but include it :raritywink:

4592971 Whoops, wrong person to reply to!! I know she's kind of a bitch, but I really wanted to throw off the reader a little.

4589872 Sorry you feel that way, sweetheart, but I'm a girl that loves to get someone, or something, that deep. Couldn't help but include it :raritywink:

for some reason I deleted it off my favorites:ajsleepy:

4612615 Well that would have been upsetting, I've got a new chapter coming out in a few days :twilightsmile:

4612494
It's all a matter of taste. I have no qualms about you personally (or others) enjoying it, it's just not my cup of tea. Like I said, though, this is a good fic - I'm certainly looking forward to more.

Awesome.

4792860 FUCKING BARRELS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Out of curiosity: While it obviously will have the human glory hole type (male client), is there any equine glory hole use in this? (female client)

5224120 First chapter, my friend, and the fourth, as soon as I finish it. I've also forgotten to put the warning on chapter 3 about m/m/f sandwich... fixing that now ^^

5225932 Oh? It actually has female/s getting oral through a glory hole?
Honestly thought I was the only one on FiMfiction to use equine glory holes. Only seen a ton of human/male ones on this site. (most of which either utterly one sided, half-assed or just lacking... people really love being bigots somehow)

And huh, re-reading the description, (only noticed there being "pony male on female human", and lets face it, like said above: really few seem to even consider female clients a possibility, that it's just a "male pleasure" thing) and some of the comments, my questions are actually answered in that xP Will definitely give this read.
Dunno your writing style, but hopefully won't be disappointing. (bit picky when it comes to detail balance. Just can't stand if someone ex: half-ass the anatomy, or those that got a like, 7 page monologue describing penises, then has one line of "it's wet" as description for the vulva...) Ah, rambling, sorry, just a tad bit exited. Assuming this is what I think it is, I've been trying to find it for months. (also, hopefully really glad I'm not the only person capable to think of that glory holes actually work for females too, especially ponies going with their anatomy xP) But without further ado, sorry for trailing, but going to read this as soon as I have time!

5227553 Oh sorry, I completely misunderstood then, but actually... I'm not sure. I might do a chapter later with a service box for females, instead of for males, but I'll be honest with you; that's not what gets me off :twilightsheepish:

As a woman I actually enjoy being in the box, my actual fetish is servicing multiple guys and having large amounts of unprotected sex knowing that I can't get pregnant. The only thing that holds me back from it in real life is STDs, but since that's not an issue in fiction I'm perfectly happy to explore my fetishes. If I'm to over-state my point on this, and I hope not spoil it for those that are looking forward to the next installment, I'm actually having a little trouble writing the next chapter because of some rather heavy lesbianism and I'm just not attracted to women in that way.

I do feel a little bad that you're going to be let down by this, but I'm writing to share my fetishes, a few of them at a time actually, if it happens to coincide with that of others, on one side of the hole or the other, then that makes it even better.

So, if you're the type that gets off from penis, either giving or receiving, awesome, I do too :pinkiehappy: But if you're looking to enjoy exploring the sheltered valley without one, then I'm afraid you'll be a little left out, that's all. Maybe in chapter 4, if I can write it properly after all these months of procrastination.

5228017 If that's a problem, you should get a male cowriter

5289163 Heh, were it so easy...

On the one hand, thanks, I appreciate you taking the time to read and give me some advice, but no, it's not a problem, I'm genuinely writing this because I have a fetish and I'm not exploring (not right now anyway) the other side because it just doesn't whet my appetite.

On the other hand... don't get me started on male co-writers. I had the perfect one. The PERFECT male writer to work with (professional editor in his day job). I seriously nyxed my entire relationship with him (ten years together gone) in the most heinous way I could have, and since then there's not been any male I could even talk to about writing this stuff in real life. Plus there's nobody I'd trust online to measure up to the ideas he had or the understanding of what made me tick to help my own ideas along.

Anyway, yeah, thanks, but don't worry about it :twilightsmile:

All three chapters are soooooo hot; and nicely written. Thanks for publishing! ❤

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