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I'm Anonymous Pegasus and I approve of his message! :pinkiecrazy:

I love that I inspired this, but I just couldn't get into this, myself. :applejackunsure: I really don't like horse anatomy, and any reference to 'winking' is a huge turn-off to me. And the rest of it was just too dirty for my (admittedly rather vanilla) tastes.

Otherwise, it was well-written. :twilightsmile: Just not my cup of tea.

4586038 Shame you don't like it so much sweetheart, but I still love you anyway :twilightsmile:

There's a glory hole group now.
Praise the moon

Hmm...
Interesting, interesting.
Will read later when I have some free time.

I came buckets 10/10 would do/read/fap again:pinkiehappy:

Mrs.Cake is sexiest pone.

So, are these all in continuity with one another? Because, well, Caramel was the stallion in the first one, I think, unless there are multiple light-brown stallions with Cutie Marks of three horseshoes. Or is he bisexual?
You know, I think I'll just ignore it for now and read on without thinking about it.

Okay, so Caramel's bi then, and these are in continuity. That's good to know. [/sincerity]
But, uh.... Would it then be entirely out of the question to have a giant orgy between all of the ponies (and one human) that have been in these chapters, once you reach the end of this.

the picture itself drew me to throw a thumbs up at this story :) lol

Liked and faved. Dis shit gon b gud.

The cervix bit kind of killed this chapter a bit for me, but all in all a well-written story.

From my personal experience, this is a perfect description of what it's like to get pounded. Good work. 10/10, good jerk.

Well that was a nice story, but Ms Cake is kinda a bitch I guese :applejackunsure: ... ow well

Oh man the first chapter was hot but this one was hawt! Very nice writing A+

I give it 10 outta 10 :twilightblush:

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4592971 Sorry you feel that way, sweetheart, but I'm a girl that loves to get someone, or something, that deep. Couldn't help but include it :raritywink:

4592971 Whoops, wrong person to reply to!! I know she's kind of a bitch, but I really wanted to throw off the reader a little.

4589872 Sorry you feel that way, sweetheart, but I'm a girl that loves to get someone, or something, that deep. Couldn't help but include it :raritywink:

for some reason I deleted it off my favorites:ajsleepy:

4612615 Well that would have been upsetting, I've got a new chapter coming out in a few days :twilightsmile:

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It's all a matter of taste. I have no qualms about you personally (or others) enjoying it, it's just not my cup of tea. Like I said, though, this is a good fic - I'm certainly looking forward to more.

4792860 FUCKING BARRELS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Out of curiosity: While it obviously will have the human glory hole type (male client), is there any equine glory hole use in this? (female client)

5224120 First chapter, my friend, and the fourth, as soon as I finish it. I've also forgotten to put the warning on chapter 3 about m/m/f sandwich... fixing that now ^^

5225932 Oh? It actually has female/s getting oral through a glory hole?
Honestly thought I was the only one on FiMfiction to use equine glory holes. Only seen a ton of human/male ones on this site. (most of which either utterly one sided, half-assed or just lacking... people really love being bigots somehow)

And huh, re-reading the description, (only noticed there being "pony male on female human", and lets face it, like said above: really few seem to even consider female clients a possibility, that it's just a "male pleasure" thing) and some of the comments, my questions are actually answered in that xP Will definitely give this read.
Dunno your writing style, but hopefully won't be disappointing. (bit picky when it comes to detail balance. Just can't stand if someone ex: half-ass the anatomy, or those that got a like, 7 page monologue describing penises, then has one line of "it's wet" as description for the vulva...) Ah, rambling, sorry, just a tad bit exited. Assuming this is what I think it is, I've been trying to find it for months. (also, hopefully really glad I'm not the only person capable to think of that glory holes actually work for females too, especially ponies going with their anatomy xP) But without further ado, sorry for trailing, but going to read this as soon as I have time!

Hm, reading so far, it seems to be a decent mix. Though, bit contemplative on all the mention of male jizz only. Along with seeming like all males are getting off from it, seeming to indicate very low amounts, if any, that are there to just service.
And hm... going with the story so far, it seems like you greatly misinterpreted what I meant with "client"... I referred to the ones getting serviced, not the one giving the service... this seems like just another of the human/male gloryholes only for males. Feh, seems like another shattered hopes... but could just be that I wasn't blunt enough in my question... never leave anything open for interpretation...
Yeah, it wasn't any female clients in this, just a female "worker". Or what to call it. *Sigh* But as said: kinda equally my fault, sorry for getting so exited before...
Though granted, you could technically do still a equine/female glory hole for chapter 5 or something...

But yeah, sorry for derailing before. Seems like I'm back to being the only person in the entire fando to have written female glory holes. Granted, I did invent them so... and have caused 100 % of all of the like... 4 female glory hole pics in the entire fandom xP
Anyhow, aside from a couple porn cliché's and one sided focus on some parts, you do write very well imo. And props for going all the way with matching anatomy.
Not a fan of the "cardboard cumdump" archetype... but least she seems to have had a sex drive... I just hope you don't do the gender based role and personality most porn have... or will the m/m chapter actually have a male equally lacking of self-regard?
Hum, not sure if it was implied she was in heat or not... but seeing how you went with proper anatomy otherwise so... can just guess. Mares supposedly can kinda chose whether or not to be impregnated on a side note. Least from what a friend that studies horse has told me.
Anyhow, can say, it was kinda decent. (Human at the end was random though) I can agree slightly that there's not too much gloryhole fics around, but I still have to state there's REALLY not enough female glory holes out there... not even 5 % of the male amount. And that's not even close to the difference for those two picture wise...
Either case, bit misunderstanding. But anyhow, I might could consider reading more, assuming you don't do the "gender based sex drives" stereotype...

All and all though, think there'd even be a chance you might give a male/female doing female client/s a try? It's not only guys that have glory holes fetishes yanno xD

5227553 Oh sorry, I completely misunderstood then, but actually... I'm not sure. I might do a chapter later with a service box for females, instead of for males, but I'll be honest with you; that's not what gets me off :twilightsheepish:

As a woman I actually enjoy being in the box, my actual fetish is servicing multiple guys and having large amounts of unprotected sex knowing that I can't get pregnant. The only thing that holds me back from it in real life is STDs, but since that's not an issue in fiction I'm perfectly happy to explore my fetishes. If I'm to over-state my point on this, and I hope not spoil it for those that are looking forward to the next installment, I'm actually having a little trouble writing the next chapter because of some rather heavy lesbianism and I'm just not attracted to women in that way.

I do feel a little bad that you're going to be let down by this, but I'm writing to share my fetishes, a few of them at a time actually, if it happens to coincide with that of others, on one side of the hole or the other, then that makes it even better.

So, if you're the type that gets off from penis, either giving or receiving, awesome, I do too :pinkiehappy: But if you're looking to enjoy exploring the sheltered valley without one, then I'm afraid you'll be a little left out, that's all. Maybe in chapter 4, if I can write it properly after all these months of procrastination.

5228017 If that's a problem, you should get a male cowriter

5289163 Heh, were it so easy...

On the one hand, thanks, I appreciate you taking the time to read and give me some advice, but no, it's not a problem, I'm genuinely writing this because I have a fetish and I'm not exploring (not right now anyway) the other side because it just doesn't whet my appetite.

On the other hand... don't get me started on male co-writers. I had the perfect one. The PERFECT male writer to work with (professional editor in his day job). I seriously nyxed my entire relationship with him (ten years together gone) in the most heinous way I could have, and since then there's not been any male I could even talk to about writing this stuff in real life. Plus there's nobody I'd trust online to measure up to the ideas he had or the understanding of what made me tick to help my own ideas along.

Anyway, yeah, thanks, but don't worry about it :twilightsmile:

Okay, I'mma tell you now. . . You are a master at this.

Keeping it classy.:raritywink:

4588822 the begining of this chapter explains it

All three chapters are soooooo hot; and nicely written. Thanks for publishing! ❤

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