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Some time has past since that night with Lyra. You've made some friends, you've found a job, and you're starting to settle into your new home. This is a slice of your life in Equestria.

All of these stories are based on random things I've thought about while watching My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. Where in the show's run they fall into... I honestly haven't decided, nor do I think it really matters. All these 'chapters' are really just short stories that each pick up at some random point from the last. Please note that these take place after A Night With Lyra, so give that one a read first!
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/86723/a-night-with-lyra

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 50 )

She's definitely going to be on my mind when I eat a cupcake.

man... what a lucky guy we have here :pinkiesick:

That was a great read!

Here. Take my like and favourite. No, I insist.

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I love the ME GUSTA face your avatar is making to go along with that comment.

Huh, never noticed it looked like that. That's my facial reaction to party.mov.

The next time you're eating a cupcake, I hope you'll think of sexy Octavia ;)

As Crowley would say, "Spoiler: You now have a cupcake fetish. And an Octavia-in-heat fetish."

Macintosh Bromance! Love it :pinkiehappy:

Just one thing:

He really was self-conscious. Noticing him pawing at the cushion as she spoke made you decide to change the subject.

Yeah....

Anyway, I look forward to more :scootangel:

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AHA! Error number 1! Thank you.

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No problemo, friendo :pinkiesmile:

great chapter!:pinkiehappy:

keep up the good work

Good stuff, I'd like to see more of Octavia though.

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yeah! good stuff man! I'm liking this so far.:pinkiehappy:

The last you heard of it was Bon Bon’s angry voice yelling “Get back here, Minty-Fresh!!!” and Lyra’s taunting laughter slipping away.

:rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_ooh.png Minty-Fresh?
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_gaze.png Yeah. Got a problem with that?

:rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

That ear flappibg moment would make an awesome .gif

“And we can do this!!!” She crossed her hooves and put on an emotionless expression. She locked eyes with you and while otherwise staying completely motionless, her ears began flapping up and down like tiny little wings.

no one could keep a straight face if they saw that:rainbowlaugh:

Too much D'aaaaaaaw:pinkiehappy:

I really enjoy this story. Keep it up. I also like have you use the mare heat in the last two chapter like that you did, made it more believable. I have read to many fic where pony become sex crazy monster that rape anything that is male.

one does not simply understand pinkie pie :pinkiehappy:

on a reality warping scale from 1-10, Pinkie is π

:rainbowlaugh:Pinkie Pie parties are the best parties:pinkiehappy:

“Oh come on!” Said Lyra. “Isn’t one of her enough? I think more than one Pinkie would destroy the town.”

Or at the very least, Applejack's barn. :ajbemused: :trollestia:

awwwwwww lyra and her human, so adorable! :raritystarry:

The wheelbarrow story actually happened, BTW. It was me and a couple of friends. It was transcribed word for word from one of my friends, drunk off her ass, as she retold the story.

i was hanging off the edge of my seat the whole time

more of this story please? ^^"

Drunk Lyra is best Lyra.

You grabbed your copy of Daring Do and the Indrian Fissure from the coffee table and tapped the ‘fiction’ label on the back cover. “Daring Do isn’t real!”

A statement which has become hilarious in hindsight due to recent episodes. (You know the one I'm talking about...) :rainbowlaugh:

I like the writing so far i think I'm gonna keep reading a few more chapters.

Excellent chapter but I think it's missing more Eeyup's from Big Mac. :applecry:

Please more chapters. I love this fanfic you are awesome.:heart::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::raritywink:

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There will be more I promise, just not for a while. I want to focus on BFC for now, and I honestly ran out of ideas for this for the time being and don't want to force them.

That being said, I've been tossing around an idea for a Trixie chapter...

4171287 trixie would definally spice things up.:trixieshiftright:
Also would we see a relationship bloom between Lyra and the main character?:pinkiehappy:

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It is a possibility, but no guarantees. This one's just being written by the seat of my pants with no long-term plan; an idea comes to mind and I make a chapter.

I might try to do a romance chapter, but I'm afraid I can't really write romance that well.

“Ah heard you share a bed and rub her tummy.”


“Seriously?! I’m going to wring her fuzzy little neck! It was one time! One time! ONCE!!! And I was drunk! Very VERY DRUNK!!!”

Is that "A Night With Lyra" reference I spy?

Your depiction of WTF for that poor human was priceless :rainbowderp:

Now that I have read this, I realize that this kind of interaction is absent from almost all of the HiE fics I have read. Just friends hanging out, shooting the (metaphorical) bull. I have to remember this for when I eventually try my hand at one. :eeyup:

Also, the thought of being too bored to read is genuinely frightening. :pinkiesick:

No joke, this has to be the most realistic thing I have ever read in an HiE Fic. :moustache:

Shoo be doo, shoo shoo be doo

Drunken magic user forcing backrubs on a puny magic-null human. <shivers> That is creepy. Well done. :moustache:

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I suggest spreading it out, having a few hints drop about Protag developing feelings and maybe similar for Lyra, but don't make it into the central point of the story until you're confident that you know how you want to make it happen. Or don't I'm just enjoying reading the stories you've come up with so far.
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I think, being new to town and unfamiliar with magic Protag would like Trixie's show.
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Reading this in the year 2018, Woo :rainbowwild:

Ah, a true pity, I seem to have made it to the end, this was a great "slice of life" fic, Good Job. :twilightsmile:

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Oh I already had an Octavia fetish.

‘Sounds like she’s sweet on you, partner.’

My only advice: Run...

This is such an adorable piece to read through.

...you exhaled deeply and folded the corner of the page...

Excuse me? I what? How dare you?

Besides, this is Ponyville. Princess Twilight Sparkle would feed me my page folding fingers if I did that to a book.

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