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As always, you have a wonderful grasp of the erotic. I always enjoy reading your work!
There is one thing though -
did you mean "grinning"?
2469246 Nope, 'gurning', technical term for making faces
I'm English and I'm not afraid to use it!
And thanks!
Pretty good.
2472334 Coming from you, I'll take the praise
Can't wait for your next fic, I'm not one for M/M, but I could definitely go for some F/F sometime soon 
damn that was hawt. That's all I can say really
This was such a fun read! I like how naturally everyone behaves and relates to each other. I REALLY like all the flirting and how creative you got with the action scenes. And what totally made the fic for me was the movie theater scene. That has to be one of the goofiest, sexiest things I've read in a fic.
Oh, and I found it clever how you kept mentioning them trying to stay quiet during their love scenes until the final scene on the beach when they could let out all their passion. That idea sold me on the story having an arc instead of just being a series of steamy scenes stitched together. Good job!
Poor pete, he's going to be so heartbroken, and he'll probably hate Caramel too.
This in turn will make Caramel hate himself for betraying him, oh dear, the trainwreck that is coming will be spectacular.
2474717 Or will it? Why was Pete staring at those scars? Was he really asleep all those times, did he really notice nothing different about the girl he's been with for so long? And if he wasn't... why is he still so positive?
I tried to put that little thought there, right at the end, just to see if anyone noticed. My own sense of d'aww wouldn't let me make Caramel a corrupting character. I like to think, quietly, just between the few people commenting here and myself, that Pete knows, but doesn't mind as long as it's Caramel, because it makes Mel happy to be with both of them.
2475117 Actually I had considered that, but thought it unlikely. I guess it's possible considering their bond and all. Although it might be true. Although you have to wonder, even if Pete is ok with Caramel having sex with Mel, would he be ok with Caramel falling in love with Mel?
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But is Pete really OK with it or does he figure that he can't stop it, and forcing the issue might cause Mel to choose Caramel over him, so he might as well hold it inside and learn to deal with it if he wants to continue being with Mel?
Even if he's truly OK with it and is willing to put his own feelings aside for the sake of making Mel happy that doesn't make situation or what Mel and Caramel are doing any less horrible.
2475318 2475427 You're right, you're right, both of you. I just couldn't do an entire story with Caramel as the lead and have him just freely cheating with his best friend's girlfriend without... I don't know, some sort of possibility of redemption.
I adore that little colt, ever since 'Caramel lost the grass seeds again', that look on his face...
Heh, these experiments into the... twists that relationships can go through, the weird way of thinking through some aspects of the mind that could turn things out like this? Yeah, they're garnering way better results than I'd thought they would. People are actually thinking about them as often as they're getting off to them. You know how much fun that is, as a writer? That's huge.
Thanks guys!
I loved every single bit of this
2477086 Oh I completely agree. Mel is so taking advantage of an innocent colt who just wants to make her happy.
Oh hai...
2700530 You certainly live up to your name
Ireyah, I hate you...but I love you. Argh, why do you have to make such a clear-cut situation, so damned complicated and realistic? Keep it black and white damn it! I want to hate Carmel for being a little homewrecker, but I can't because Mel started it! But Carmel should know better! Then then there's the little what if Pete knows it!? Argh, damn you!
9/10 Would clop again.
2836447 You're a sweetheart, but if I can get some time I'm going to do some more that'll hopefully play into other taboos and muddy waters until you're forced to say 'what did I just clop to?'
Or I could just do a straight-forward play on a false-incest with a human raised in Equestria from a young age lusting after his foster mother (and possibly sister). You never know
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Backstabbing horse and whore!
Yet again, that was fugin' hot. But I was feelin' pretty gay the way I kept rereading.... certain parts of the chapter. And boy did it feel right.
Next chapter engage.
10/10 would do it again
4355068 Heh, now that's a review, thank you so much!
Also, it's porn sweetie, you don't have to be ashamed of how many times you read bits of it, that's what it's specifically written for ^^
4669373 Thanks for going through these chapters for me, I've got no idea when I'll have time to go correcting them, but I'll try at some point.
As for the relationships here, well the doubts and questions you've raised are kind of the point. Mel should be talking to her boyfriend if she wants things to be open, but she seems to be getting a huge thrill out of cheating. Pete should have said something if he'd noticed, so if he hasn't then the scene looking at the bite-marks is coincidence, and then again if he has noticed, what reasons could he have for keeping silent?
And as a parting shot, the few times I've tried it cum with ice cubes was one heck of a way to finish off a good movie. But that may be the fact that I don't have sensitive teeth, so I can crunch the ice cubes up with that gooey texture and swallow everything together
It's sorta sad you had to end it there, I really like the way it played out. I just finished and I enjoyed it all, I understand why you stopped it, but I cannot wait to see more stories like this! ^w^
Keep up the great work~!
I approve.
They could just be in a poly relationship.
Problem solved!
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Those two pictures make me hit the wall at my right ; the first one (the first publicated) because of the text and the second one because of the 'don't give a single f**k' attitute you should have to to that but also because of the "majestic as fuck" in the URL
So to describe those two pictures one face and a reference (WARNING CONTEINT SPOILERS OF THE SERIE DBZ)
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PS : sorry for the bad english : I am french
Delicious trilling story
Sooo Hot... Amazing Work
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You made Pete a cuck....gross