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Luffy-Kun


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Ah ha. A silence of the lambs. Pinkie does fit the bill for a homocidal killer :pinkiecrazy:

Wow, this is a very interesting premise. I'll mark it to read later.

So, Pinkie will... have an old friend for dinner?:trollestia:

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I thought so! I liked the idea of Pinkamena as Hannibal. :pinkiecrazy:

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Thank you! I hope you like it.

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:raritywink:

I want to read this story because I see PinkieDash and Rarijack, but I'm not sure with the Grimdark rating =/. I hope your fic does well though, the concept sounds good. :twilightsmile:

I usually steer clear of any grimdark, but since
a)I have read and actually liked the original books
b)I am a pinkiedash fan
c)the plotline has potential and the writing style seems promising
d)I just read the first chapter and it actually had good grammar
I will give this a try! Favorited and liked (for now)! :pinkiesmile:

P.s.
It's Hannibal Lecter not Lector. A small thing, but I kinda found it annoying...

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Its not too bloody, but its pretty descriptive. I wanted to be safe. Since the themes are "mature" due to its murder-mystery plot.

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I spelled it with an "e" but my spellcheck corrected it, so I thought I remembered it incorrectly. :derpyderp2:

Read this on deviantart. It's great. I hope to see more

Oooh! I love the HANNIBAL series, i'm even reading the last book at the moment myself!. Insta Fav! Look foward to more chapters.:pinkiehappy:

Did Pinkie ever eat a census taker? With a Chianti perhaps? :pinkiecrazy: Can't wait for more. Definitely tracking this one!

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Hee hee. Its also on my fanfiction.net account. I like to multi-post my work and get good feedback so I can improve. I want to actually attempt to publish an original work eventually. So I want to improve my style. :rainbowkiss:

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Me too. When I saw (the cover shot) I imagined Pinkamena as Lecter and Dashie as Clarice. "Hello, Dashie." :pinkiecrazy:

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Its funny you should say that. I had a little idea of a Cupcakes fan-prequel with how Pinkie Pie fell into madness and the "numbers system" got started. My idea centered around the Ponyville census and the registration numbers of each pony being put into a huge raffle, like a powerball of death. Lol.

>>Luffy-Kun

:pinkiegasp: Do it. Do it pleeeeease. :pinkiecrazy: Fly fly fly and write! She can start with free range rude first. :rainbowlaugh:

Definitely tracked, this is great.

It's saddening that stories as well done as this get the downvote while so many half-assed ones get all the thumbs up. Just because people don't know what to look for in literature, I guess. They just need the stomach to get through this kinda stuff. :applejackunsure:

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I will think about going back to it after I finish this story. I have the second chapter almost finished and the third one started. I sometimes write the part that comes to me then tie it together.

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:twilightblush: Hee hee. Thank you!

I like where this is going. Tracked... for now.
:moustache:

Intelligent Grimdark? Continue.

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I love the idle threat "tracked... for now!" :trixieshiftright:
Lol. Thanks for reading. I hope you like where it goes.

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I hope to! I have the second chapter almost done. Its such a complicated plot that I want to do it right.

I like the setup for this.

So is Applejack the Unicorn Killer and Rarity the latest victim who she falls in love with.

Also if it is Applejack do her motives have anything to do with earth pony pride. Because Sgt Sprinkles idea's for a sequel had it that Applejack was partially behind Pinkie's massacres.

Just throwing guesses.

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Interesting guesses!
Nah, I didn't tag the killer. I wanted it to be a real secret.
:rainbowkiss:

He did? What an interesting idea. Hehe. I killed off AJ in my fansequel.

Hrm. I thought at first that 'Buffalo Bill' would be a stallion. That + unicorn could only point to Fancy Pants or Shining Armour, but then 'Buffalo Bill' was in the mare-centered bar. Changing the gender to mare really makes things harder...

From Canterlot, is a mare and a unicorn... I'm thinking Fleur? 's the only character in the possible character tags who fits this. Or maybe Cadence...

Okay since I didn't know it wasn't one of the ponies tagged I will guess again.

Is it Luna?

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You'll see! :rainbowlaugh:

I promise. Remember, the whole of the cast was relocated to Canterlot pretty much, since that's where the capital (and the EBI) is. It *is* a mare. I'll tell you that.

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Dangit, that just generalizes it even more. Not much to do but guess, and in that case I'm putting my bits on Trixie. Because she's a nooblord at magic and, I dunno, thinks obtaining moar horns makes her more magical. :trixieshiftright:

Y1

I'm going to guess... Octavia.
I'm probably wrong but she lives in Canterlot, she has reason to want to kill unicorns being an earth pony musician, it would be really unexpected and everyone is assuming that the killer is a unicorn. As far as I can tell the killer doesn't have much magical control or skill (basically just flashing some bright light at Rarity) and maybe she has a horn strapped to her head or something.
If not her then Trixie because she's really not that great and powerful and wants to steal other people magic or something.
Good story so far by the way. Not going to favorite it until I see some Pinkie Pie/ Hannibal Lecter but rest assured that I've enjoyed it and that you're definitely on the right lines.

Still really awesome. I'm really interested to see the whole interaction with the killer and rarity as well as the interaction between pinkie and dash

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Next chapter Pinkamena comes in. I wanted to establish the cast and the case before I brought in the ever fabulous Cupcake Killer.

the leads we get here:
-from canterlot
-unicorn / alicorn
-rum and coke
-female(?)

that isn´t much at all, suspects:
-trixie(?)
-fleur de lis
-luna/nightmare moon
-celestia
-cadence
>> y1fellas
what rarity got was a deep frying enough to knock her out, that´s a little more than the basics i´d think

Everybody is wrong. The killer is obviously.... Gustave le Grand! images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120410162733/mlp/images/a/a7/Gustave_with_the_conveyor_belt_S2E24.png

This is getting better with each chapter. Now, I just want to see Hannibal Pinkter.

Very nice so far! Of course, I'm a sucker for Rarijack, so including that gets me on your side.

All we need now is Pinkamena Lecter Pie.

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Question: is Pinkamena going to act exactly like Hannibel or is she going to be herself?.

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I love people discussing my lil' mystery. I am happy you actually figured out WHY Rarity passed out. Oh electric shock, why are you so awful? Lol

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This made my day. Bahaha.

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I love Rarijack too! I wish I could find more of it. *pout*

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She is going to be a combination of "fandom" Pinkamena with Hannibal tendencies and just a little canon Pinkie.

I found this on Deviant Art... cool shit has been discovered...

You know why I like this? Because it's like read an episode of Criminal minds, mixed with CSI. And that's awesome!

I like your Pinkamena. That's the only thing I have to say about her... for now.

And I think I know what all those unicors have in common [Evil laugh]

P.S: You got my interest. Don't lose it.

Trixie as the Horn Hawker? Not a bad fit, but I was hoping for a stallion. You know, for the creepy sexual arena of the thing.

That said, you're doing well.

I am really enjoying your story. I really can't wait to see more

Sweet, a new chapter. Keep up the good work :pinkiecrazy:

Comment posted by Industrial deleted Sep 17th, 2013

569039 Bipolar disorder is switching from major depression to manic moods, and those moods usually last for months at a time before they switch.

She actually exhibits multi-personality disorder aka disassociative personality disorder. Easily switching personalities and being completely unaware of the change. Although sometimes one personality is aware of the other.

I KNEW it was Trixie.

I notice how, while Hannibal was very witty, Pinkamena here is very... playful. Very fitting. :pinkiecrazy:

Also, dat FlutterMac.

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I am glad you like it!

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Considering I watch waaaay too much Criminal Minds as well as other such cop shows like The Mentalist, Bones, and Law & Order I am glad I managed to do this. I feel cool. :moustache:

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Aww. Who says Trixie can't be creepy and sexual? Lol. I actually went through a lot of debate over who I thought the villain should be. Originally, I thought I should make it Little Strongheart. You know, a literal "Buffalo Bill"? But then I thought I was like: "I am stupid as buck and obviously spending too much time with my dumbass boyfriend." So I nixed that. I didn't want the killer to skin/wear the victims like Jame Gumb did in the original books because Pinkamena does that so it seemed like too much. When I decided Rarity was the victim, I worked from there. I also wanted the killer to be somepony the readers knew. So, Trixie. Lol.
:trixieshiftright:

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THANKS~! I enjoy your readership.

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Whatsup818 is right, its more like multiple personality disorder than bi-polar, but I can see why you thought the latter. Though, I don't have a specific condition in mind for Pinkamena because well, Pinkie Pie is so random. Lol. Honestly, I like to leave her condition vague and her motivations confusing because it is kind of what makes her fun.

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YEAH YOU DID! I am glad, I was worried that people wouldn't like her. I didn't want to make her too intelligent and lose all the Pinkie in her. If that makes sense. Hee hee. I think FlutterMac is cuuuute~! So I threw it in. A little hetero in my homo.

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I'm a crime investigation lover. Wherever there is a crime, a mystery, or a detective, I'll be there. :rainbowdetermined2:

Now I'm curious, You also watch Castle?

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No, I hear its really good. Should I take the time? :duck:

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Well, it's really funny... I think you should.:pinkiehappy:

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I'll take a peek. TO THE INTERNET! :pinkiehappy:

this is coming along great, i love reading all of these fics about crazy ponies. Aren't they so fun to write?!:pinkiecrazy:
Also, are you by any chance a james patterson fan? your writing style seems very similar to that way he writes his detective novels.

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Whaa, I do too. I like to take cartoon characters and break their psyche. My Little Pony gives me a lot to work with! Lol. Nah, I haven't read anything by James Patterson, though I am aware who he is. I am completely flattered that you think I sound like a published author though. :rainbowkiss:

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Soooo..... :duck:

Do you like Castle or not?

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Its pretty good. Solid writing. Great cast. I will have to catch up on the episodes when I can.

I :heart: murder mysteries AND shipping,i really like your pinkamena pie please post more chapters this story is getting more and more interesting

that story with the party sounds.... amazingly less bad than the cupcake killer stuff......
but you must have done something right it plays out in my head like a film.

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