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  • 107w, 3d
    As you may have noticed...

    ...I've not been on FIMFiction for a few months. Actually, I've not been online at all. I've been taking a break from my internet existence, although I didn't really make a conscious decision to do so. Things just seemed to work out that way. Maybe finishing Much Ahoof took it out of me?

    All I can do is beg your patience as I work out what I want to do. I think I need to work on my own projects for a while. The ponies are still dear to my heart - of course! - and I think that when Season 3 comes along I'll be gripped by new inspiration, but please don't be surprised if I suddenly start churning out stories again next week. Inspiration is a bit like that - you never know when it will strike you.

    Thank you all for everything,  

    Butterscotch <3

    39 comments · 1,038 views
  • 116w, 18h
    There will be a Part 9 of Much Ahoof, + an Epilogue!

    Hi everyone! :pinkiehappy:

    I noticed that there's been a little confusion about a comment I made under Part 8 of Much Ahoof About Nothing. There WILL be a Part 9 and then a much-shorter Epilogue after that to bring everything to an appropriate close.

    Also, apologies for the little dive into the SAD tag that the story has taken. :pinkiesad2: The climax of the story was supposed to come out in a single part, which would have measured the drama out a little bit better - Part 9 has the lion's share of the laughs and heart-warming moments. It's a prime example of the ol' Butterscotch tone-shift (which caused so much consternation in The Party Hasn't Ended when it first came out), but rest assured that it's a temporary one, and one that is necessary for the story. Just remember:

    The night is always darkest right before the dawn.

    I will say no more! Except to say that you won't be waiting a month for part 9. It's mostly written, but it needs a lot of smoothing around the edges, and real life looks like it will give me the time to do it for once! :pinkiesmile:


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  • 118w, 6h
    Much Ahoof Part 8 coming in a day or two...

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  • 119w, 5d
    The League of Extraordinary Gentlecolts + one Gentlefilly

    Hi everyone!

    By now, you'll all have realised I was in on that little project where I was paired with the most excellent Obselesence: both of us wrote stories and uploaded each other's to see what would happen.

    First of all, the reason I joined in on this was not because I wanted to trick people. The reason? I was curious! I wanted to see if people could spot my writing style; if people would react differently to a story which was SAD rather than SHIPPING and so on. I found the results pretty interesting.

    I loved Obselesence's story, didn't you? There was something so hard to define - a  melancholy feeling that I've never been able to capture in my own writing. My stories are always WHAM BANG BIG EMOTIONS kinda deals, but Obselesence is the master of something I struggle to achieve myself - subtlety, Also, his Steven Magnet was amazingly well written.

    I hope everyone enjoyed both of our stories: Obselesence's Into the Everfree and my own Fluttershy's Infernal Adventure. If you missed one, jump in and read it RIGHT NOW!

    Also, the last part of Much Ahoof is about a week away. Sorry to keep you all waiting!

    Butters <3

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  • ...

Pinkie Pie's unrequited love for Rainbow Dash reaches crisis point as she fears the party in her heart has at long last come to an end.

Illustration by the awesome Mogasaki/Swaetshrit.

First Published
13th Jan 2012
Last Modified
26th Jan 2012
#1 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Oh goodness! It's on FIMfic! No way! :D

#2 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Oh! Flippin' Hell! YES!

#3 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I remember reading this. One of my favourite fics and a brilliant story, apart from the very very very end scene of the story (not including epilogue), if I remember correctly. Not the entire ending, just that scene.

#4 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

5 stars and favorited!

#5 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

GLORIOUS!!!! It's on fimfic. Insta fave!

#6 · 149w, 2d ago · 2 · · Chapter 1 ·

OMG THIS WAS THE FIRST MLP FANFIC I EVAR READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW IVE MISSED UUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!11!!!1!!!!!!ONE :raritystarry:

#7 · 149w, 2d ago · · 2 · Chapter 1 ·

Read this a long time ago.

Sorry Butter. This is absolutely terrible for reasons I've already stated almost a year ago.

Still love "Here's to you!" though. You're a good writer, but you went overboard here.

#9 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I remember reading this on deviant art, amazing story BTW!

#10 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Oh, I read this on DeviantArt a long time ago! Loved it; I don't even ship Pinkie/Dash and I just adore this story.

#11 · 149w, 2d ago · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

And so It has begun.

I might have to read this fic again, one of my all time favourite stories (including published stuffs) and one of the only stories I've ever read that made me cry.

And to anyone who is a first time reader of this fic, strap in and enjoy the ride :)

#12 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


I LOVED this story. seriously. 6/5 stars. PieDash isn't my fav ship, but this is one of my go to shipfic recommendations.

#13 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·


I love this story! Pinkie and Dashie are so cuuuute in this!

#14 · 149w, 2d ago · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

this is the first fanfic of MLP i ever read and it made me a pinkiedash shipper.

i ship them extremely hard now thanks to this.

i regret nothing.

#15 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Omg!!! Yes!!! It's finally up here! I remember reading this long ago, it's what got me started in the fandom! I LOVE this story so much, even though I don't really like the pairing. This is an amazing piece of work right here, anyone reading for the first time, prepare yourselves now for the epicness ahead!

5/5, tracked, favorited. What more can I do for this story!

#16 · 149w, 2d ago · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

Shit, I feel like I'm the only one on earth that hasn't read this.

#18 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Lol, you are :pinkiehappy:

First on EqD, now here! And I can track Butter!

Def. not stalkerish or anything!

#19 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I haven't read this story either, but I intend to change that :) track!

#20 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

That cover picture is beautiful - who did it?

Also, I echo previous sentiments about this particular piece of work being the first MLP fic I read - couldn't have picked a better introduction. I will definitely read this again as it's posted.

#21 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Read this on EqD, and it still holds up as one of my all-time favorites. :yay:


#22 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

This story is the most amazing story ever :3 <3

#23 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>127319 We are the 1% apparently! If it's got Dash, I have to read it!

#24 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I've never seen this story before, but because of the comments it looks like I'll need to be tracking it.

>>127589 We are indeed.

"You've got to come with me! Something big is happening!" :pinkiegasp: My prediction: Rainbow Dash is dying! Then Pinkie kills herself in her sadness.



No uproarious laughter? :rainbowhuh:


No.... I didn't expect any. God I'm sadistic. Why did I even type this comment and bother posting it? 99% of the people who read this comment will have already read the fic and know I'm full of manure, apparently. Plus, now I'm having a conversation with myself. I'm posting this comment before things get out of control. :pinkiecrazy:

#25 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Thanks for your comments, everyone! :yay:


Hi Yera! It's by the talented Mogasaki:

I have a small gallery of art inspired by my stories here on my DA: - there are a couple of other beautiful pieces inspired by Party there!

#26 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

DAAAAWWWWW....cant wait

#27 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Oh.... someone else who knows Röyksopp

#28 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I do love this story, though I recall the last chapter being way too adult and out of place for my liking, given the tone of the rest of the story. Any chance of a more toned-down family friendly ending? :fluttercry:

#29 · 149w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

OOOOO, you uploaded it here :pinkiehappy: I might be tempted to read it again :heart: as it being one of my favorite pinkie dash fics

#30 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Really enjoying it so far, definitely tracking this one.

#31 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

wow. how did i ever miss this gem? wait... duh. i'm still relatively new to the fanfic part of the fandom. well, i must say. i'm not a big shipfic person, nor am i too fond of the PinkieDash pairing. but i gotta say. love this. soooo muchy

#32 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

:fluttercry: One sided love why do you hurt so much?

#33 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>127937 I agree. I remember reading this at night while I was supposed to be studying and the end just killed all the joy for me. I actually regreted that I've spend 6 hours in the row reading it:applecry:

But apart from the ending it's one of the best fficks (not only about mlp) I've ever read so I'm sure going to read it again. After all I have to do something instead of studying for exams :pinkiecrazy:

#34 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


I wouldn't go that far. I still loved the story, but the tone of the whole thing was very sweet and then suddenly it shifts into adult clop when there were thousands of more in-keeping ways of doing it! :pinkiesick:

#35 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I'd just like to clarify a few comments people have made about the so-called "adult" or "cloppy" ending that "spoiled" it for them. :pinkiesmile:

Nothing happens in this so-called "cloppy" ending except for a little conversation between Pinkie and Dash - sex is mentioned, but nothing graphic is described. The whole scene is cute and funny rather than being "cloppy" in any way whatsoever.

To give you an idea of the so-called "cloppiness", let's put things on a scale: 10 being super-cloppy and 1 being not cloppy at all. Now, I'd place The Luxury Lotus Spa Follies at around 8 and Rarity's Magic Book around 6. Swayback Mountain is a 4.

The Party Hasn't Ended is a 2.

So don't let these comments stop you from reading it! After you read the story, I think you'll agree that poor Pinkie and Dash deserved a little bit of fun in the end rather than just a chaste kiss. :scootangel:

Hope that clears things up for people! :pinkiehappy:

#36 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>127937 No! This is about love, man! Don't get bitchy - Pinkie's twitchy! Go with the flow and let it be, the story is fine, you'll see! Open your mind and drain all the doubt! There's no reason to cry or pout!

kk, 'nuff like that.

#37 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I can't wait for the rest of the updates!

But if i may ask, why are you only uploading a chapter a day? :pinkiehappy:

#38 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·


I think she's releasing a chapter a day giving her new audience a greater chance to see it, which is really a good idea. Blat it up in one go and it has far less chance to be seen and appreciated.

I liked this on DA, but DA is bloody awful for stories. This is much nicer.

Any changes?

#39 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I agree with Butters. Blueshift and that other foal need to grow up. I mean, what, do you have to be ten or something to be offended by the mere mention of a healthy relationship between consenting adults? I didn't see pony tongues between pony thighs, so it wasn't the slightest bit cloppy for me.

#40 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

This is one of my favorite FiM fics!

#41 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

No way. This is on here now.

Where are my words.

#42 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>128877 Yes, really! I'm so happy I HNNNNNNG'd when I saw it was on FiMFic! :rainbowkiss:

#43 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Hah...  This is a great first chapter!  But honestly my absolute favorite bit was...

Lyra nodded, "I think so," she replied. Her eyes sparkled. Had...had the moment finally come? After so many years of waiting?

Bon-Bon laughed loudly. "Oh that Pinkie Pie! What a ridiculous thing to say!"

Lyra nodded, but then her bottom lip started to quiver and she turned away so that Bon-Bon couldn't see the tears welling in her eyes.

:rainbowlaugh:  Oh dear ha ha ha

#45 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I love this story... but WHERE IS EVERYPONY FINDING THE FULL VERSION? :raritydespair:

#46 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I love how you hint towards possible background shipping on you fics. Lovely!

#47 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>129610 at deviant art or EqD.

#48 · 149w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·



When I originally uploaded Party to DA, it was about one part a week (basically as I wrote it!) and many readers seemed to enjoy it being serialised - so I'm trying to do the same on for those who didn't read it the first time. But don't worry! It won't be one part a week, but every day or so. :twilightsheepish:

If anyone gets sick of reading it that way, just point yourself to my DA, where you can read all of it in one go if you like! Be warned, though - it takes four hours on average.:twilightsmile:

#49 · 149w, 15h ago · · · Chapter 3 ·


I am loving this story:rainbowkiss:

poor Pinkie!:pinkiesad2:

5 stars all around, and i hope to see more:twilightsmile:

#50 · 149w, 15h ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

so cute...

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