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Fluttershy is suffering from depression. Rainbow Dash has had a falling-out with one of her only close family members. As they turn to each other for comfort, they begin to find light despite their lives being shrouded in darkness.
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Cover art is not mine. It was drawn by this person right here.
FlutterDash is involved.
Thanks to my fabulous editor, Espeon_in_the_Morning.
Thanks to my other fabulous editor, Fantasia Archsage.
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A nice little read, it will be interesting to see how the story develops from here, cant wait for the next chapter, and happy new year ^.^
3712359 You too, thank you!
Keep it how it is! Please dont linger into the dark territory
I wouldn't change anything about it.
It was a cute story
I enjoyed it
3714369 Thank you kindly. This is actually the most well-recived fanfic I've written so far, even topping Night Crawlers!
Interesting start. Yeah, the razor blade would have been too much
I'm a little curious what it was that caused Fluttershy to get depressed. I'm looking forward to see how you bring the FlutterDash into this.
The feels at the end the FEEEELLLSSSS
Every time i see that, i think of that gay douche Justin Bieber
thank God he's retired!!
3716902 I've forgotten about that little screw-up. Meh. I like that phrase, though.
Decent story so far, but I'm finding a surprising amount of spelling and grammar errors, as well as a disturbing number of words that have seemingly been omitted where they are needed. I would recommend doing a few read-throughs to find the errors, and correcting them. Careless mistakes can ruin a good story.
3718102 Thanks for the feedback, I really do need an editor.
3722080 Not really. Most of the mistakes I've found are careless ones, usually caused by rushing or a lack of focus. Just before you post a chapter, SLOWLY read through it once or twice.
Editors are only needed for people that don't know the most basic grammar and spelling rules; I do all my own editing, for example.
MOAR!!!
I'm liking this story so far. It's been a while since I've seen a decent sad-toned story.
Out of curiosity, where is the rest of the mane 6? Have they moved on already in this story?
3761900 Oh, no, they're still around, but this mainly focuses on the relationship between Pinkie, Dashie, and Fluttershy. And of course, FlutterDash.
If enough people want it, I'll do a epilogue kinda chapter telling the story of their wedding, and the rest of the Mane 6 will be there.
Here is the review courtesy of The Pleasant Commentator and Review Group. BADA-BOOM!
Your story has been officially graded an...
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Amethyst by the Gem Hunters.
So far from what I have read, it is something different from my usual reads. Not much into sad fics, but it doesn't mean I enjoy them.
No noticeable spelling and grammar errors, so nice job there.
Probably because this is just the start of the fic, I can't really say I have an opinion of this. I will continue to watch this one, though, as it has potential. It is just to early to make a judgment call.
Your characters are nicely written, a definite plus. A believable scenario thus far if it were to happen, based around their strong friendship. Keep up the good work, and I would have no issues raising the grade.
CANCELLED!? Du fuq bro?
I'm slightly depressed that this story was cancelled; it had a lot of potential.
This story is so heart warming. Sad but heartwarming.
Im soooooo loving the idea for this stories plot line thus far.
Brilliant, yet simplistic.
I got to say im a bit worried that you cancelled this story when it has such modest and meaningful potential.
I would like to hear reasons as to why it is cancelled. 
Btw, I love to do live readings and story critiquing as its written through skype and other means. If your interested in chatting it up one day pm me a message. I do readings for a good few authors.
Stay awesome, /)
Bam! soo good.
Dawwww... it only makes sense that such close friends since they were very young (most likely supporting each other throughout middle and high school), would be the ones to comfort and care for each other when no one else could.
Totally head canon concept in the parenthesis btw. Always hoping that I will come across a story with that in mind.
Hope to see this story continued one day.....over the rainbow..... hehehe I had to say it
P.S. Flutterdash = 2nd favorite shipping
I love this!
Such a shame that it got cancelled