The Party Breaker

Pinkie has strong feelings for a certain mare and intends on acting on them. However when she finds out she's too late, she tries her best to forget.

Chapters (4)

Emerging Feelings · 15th Aug 2012 · 3,307 words
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Despair · 15th Aug 2012 · 3,001 words
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Torture · 15th Aug 2012 · 3,451 words
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Mentality · 15th Aug 2012 · 3,171 words
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ScootzTheRipper

ScootzTheRipper #1 · Mar 8th, 2012 · · · Emerging Feelings ·

Nice. tracking

Petrichor

Petrichor #2 · Mar 8th, 2012 · · · Despair ·

Awww...poor Pinkie Pie.

I enjoyed reading your story. Can't wait for the next chapter

Petrichor

Petrichor #3 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Torture ·

MOAR!!

Electric Mane Six

Electric Mane Six #4 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Torture ·

If I were a betting man, my bet would be that Pinkie has hyperglycemia. All those sugary comfort foods take their tole.

Thedever

Thedever #5 · Mar 10th, 2012 · · · Torture ·

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That was my first thought too. Looks like pinkie might kick the bucket.

SpringWonder

SpringWonder #6 · Mar 14th, 2012 · · · Torture ·

Fluttershy is my favourite pony (I'm quite shy too and it's a problem for me) and I understand how Pinkie Pie feels (jealousy I guess or heartbreak, i'm not sure I haven't been in a relationship before.). I really, really dislike the FlutterMac shipping, of course the whole reason i'm reading this is to see what happens otherwise I would completely avoid FlutterMac stories (Because i'd end up talking about how I dislike it, like I am doing now. Sorry! ). I do hope that events unfold well for Pinkie Pie.

Still I find this fic to be really good, I have it tracked.

Thank you author!

AlleyWayAppleJack

AlleyWayAppleJack #7 · Mar 14th, 2012 · · · Torture ·

So sad right now......Oh Pinkie....your situation is never fun....also Twilight trying her best to comfort Pinkie yet feeling helpless as she watches her friend just tear herself apart...Tracking this as I want to see where this goes!