The Very Pink of Perfection

Happily going on with her life, Fluttershy couldn't have asked for anything more. But when a certain pink pony catches her eye, all she could will herself to do was to pursue her. But, not all stories have a happy ending.

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PatRoison

PatRoison #1 · Mar 13th, 2012 · · · Advice ·

Yay for PinkieShy! I like how this is starting. Gonna track this.

Noash123

Noash123 #2 · Mar 13th, 2012 · · · Advice ·

Wow.. better liked than I could have hoped for. Anyway, any feedback is well appreciated. Helps me straighten the writing out.

Noash123

Noash123 #3 · Mar 14th, 2012 · · · Advice ·

Alright, updated the cover art. Hopefully it's much better than the other image I had up.

Deadontheinside

Deadontheinside #4 · Mar 14th, 2012 · · · Advice ·

320765nice avatar......SHES A PONYalso great fic so far

Noash123

Noash123 #5 · Mar 14th, 2012 · · · Advice ·

321881 Hah, thanks.

Deadontheinside

Deadontheinside #6 · Mar 14th, 2012 · · · Advice ·

322738a mentlegen must always give compliments to those who show great talent

flshgordon003

flshgordon003 #7 · Mar 15th, 2012 · · · Advice ·

This is great gotta love pinkieshy

Noash123

Noash123 #8 · Apr 12th, 2012 · · · Advice ·

Alright, I removed Applejack from the tags as she is not a main character in the story, only a supporting character. Also, sorry about the WAY overdue chapter. I'll have it up tomorrow or Friday.

Noash123

Noash123 #9 · Apr 15th, 2012 · · · Confessions ·

Sorry about the late post. I'll try to get some more pictures into it tomorrow. Didn't think them necessary to just post the chapter.

PatRoison

PatRoison #10 · Apr 15th, 2012 · · · Confessions ·

Awesome to see the update. I like how Twilight is the go to pony for advice. I look forward to seeing Fluttershy tell Pinkie. Should be a fun scene to read.

Noash123

Noash123 #11 · May 4th, 2012 · · · Confessions ·

I'm going to repeat what I put up on my other story. Sorry to say this, but I've got a lot of stuff going on right now. I haven't gotten an opportunity to write, so I'm putting this story "On Hiatus" until I do. Really sorry.