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VampDash


What is a pony? But a miserable pile of secrets.

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FINALLY!!! Been a while since I have seen a Darkness fic of any sorts on this site. Much Mustachios to you. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Very nice.

Except now I feel ashamed that I haven't updated my own Darkness fic in a while. :fluttershysad:
You spoony bard! :flutterrage:

Oh hell yes. This is going to be good

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Ha! Now you cross blades with Tandem the Spoony.:rainbowlaugh:

Found one thing that bugged me o.o at the very end you said she "beating his chest with her fists." I also recon we talked about it being anthro or not but all the way here i've thought it were ponies, So either my mind is fucked up as always, or you wrote fist instead of hoof :p

3411680 That didn't really give me much of an answer :rainbowwild:

3411703 It's meant to be a hand bro.

3411705 umm yeah about that, "the unicorn stallion said to the tied up earth pony colt." That dosn't make much sense....

3413069 umm yeah, I've helped him out with a few fics and he have helped me xD

Aww man! I was looking forward to how you would kill RD x3

3417413 you got to make up for it bro! :rainbowwild:

3417422 I'll hold you to your word then :twilightsmile:

3417422 dude you have a gift... my stories can't hold a candle up to that. You are a hero my friend. I am in aww of this story and your writing style. Keep up this magnificent work.

3418293 I shall. Also when do you want to do that Soulcalibur crossover?

3418389 i think im going to really like the rest of this MLP-Prototype crossover, i actually played the first game and it was very good.

i really love this crossover of MLP & Prototype.

3418952 It's a crossover with The Darkness. I actually have one that crosses over with Prototype but it's a separate story and sucks.

3419946 The Darkness and Prototype have their similarities and differences, the thing about prototype though is it can be controlled, whereas in The Darkness, as i sometimes hear is uncontrollable.

Hmmm....not bad, I like the start and the fact that Cadence killed Armor, that's a twist. Hmm....maybe you could explain more about the family though and Blueblood, maybe more about the Darkness as well. I'm impressed though so far, I shall read on:twilightsmile:

Shit, now THAT was very fast paced but very intense, very impressive, hoping to see more background on the Mane Six soon or later, very good job so far, wonder who killed them...hmmm....dark half of Twilight? Now you have my attention:twilightsmile:

this is already getting Awesome.

Jakie Estacado is the true host. this treachery will not be left unpunished........Sorry about that. Cool story.:twilightsmile::moustache::trollestia:

this just keeps getting better and better, keep it up.:raritywink:

this is awesome great job so far

Hell yeah, I knew you'd never let us down, I absolutely loved this chapter, keep it up.:raritywink:

god dayum

3467709 I know Blueblood is a dick.

Twilight the Darkness host and Cadance hosting The Angelus. Interesting.

MUST KILL BLUEBLOOOOOOD!!!!!

I love it man, keep it up.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Can't wait for the next chapter, i love this story.

Shit, makes me wonder why exactly her friends are needed if she's the one with all the power? :unsuresweetie: I know it sounds odd, but I don't trust Dash in this....something seems off about her, I love the snakes, they are just bad ass:ajsmug: Confused on why you use both fuck and buck for this story, but it is your story, personally I always use buck myself:rainbowlaugh: Cursed forever more, eh? NEXT!

3936715 They have.... traces of her.

......Why the BUCK would you side with the enemy, no one in their right mind would just switch forces like that, that makes me pissed, you should have killed her Twi, shit!:facehoof: I don't trust her, I like her but I don't trust her one bit....also Spike is a beast, this should be fun, glad to see him added:ajsmug:

3936778 Who said she joined the bad guys? I didn't. :pinkiecrazy:

Ha, Spike really is a badass, he is fun in this story, odd how Fluttershy was not at least beaten up but I laughed when Rarity got the shit kicked out of her, strange how Mary and Twi just....appeared, no details on their trip or nothing, not even a break for cidar....fail:facehoof: I highly doubt a 'loyal' guard would tell their enemy the name of their boss so quickly, though I am confused about AJ....why is she hearing voices in her head? And why is the voice against hearing Celestia's name....hmmm...:unsuresweetie:

:rainbowlaugh: Spike is funny as hell in this but again they just...appeared in Ponyville? No build up on the ride, no talking and details about shit they just...appeared? Ooookkk then:facehoof: Wow, everypony is a gangster in this story:rainbowlaugh: I know Twi loves her friends but to bring them back to life and lie to one of them is going to kick her ass in the long run:facehoof:

So.....no big fight and a few small guards? Find that a bit unrealistic myself, all that hype only to be disappointed, shit. :facehoof: Finally, the bad mare goes back to her roots, kill the bitch, for the love of the GODS, kill the bitch!!!!:yay: Odd scene with Blueblood, could not have been a flashback, could it have? Who was the filly? Why kill her? For what purpose? And why the buck do the grown mares allow the short dragon to drive a bucking semi? Shit...this is all kinds of confusing, finally, how can Fluttershy give Twilight one of two very important guns, love duel weapons by the way if she's disgusted by dead bodies? Is she not a killer herself? Gods so many questions, so little time. Needs longer chapters, that's for sure:facehoof: NEXT!

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