What is a pony? But a miserable pile of secrets.
It wasn't too long after the fight. It took everything she had to stop him but in the end nothing short of a miracle truly helped her.... and yet she couldn't help but feel that she could've done.... MORE. Now she seeks to rectify her mistake. But first.... she has to visit a few friends first.
A One-Shot done with help from Rated Ponystar. Thanks you wonderful bastard you.
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That is so sad. An amazing yet sad ending.
6822834 *Blush*
6822837 you should make another where twilight comes back.
6822869 There's a reason this is a One-Shot. I feel if I did a sequel it would ruin the impact of this story.
6822870 oh well it was worth askin
Well, I must say I was rather touched by this little story. You done good. Also, sorry I haven't been in contact with you for awhile. It's not because I hate you or anything, it's just that I've been really busy with a few of my other projects.
6822946 It's fine.
6822961 6822869 6822946 To quote the movie Unforgiven
"It's a hell of a thing killing a man. You take away all he's got... And all he's ever gonna have."
I felt the fourth wall breaking broke the mood of the story (no pun intended).
6823480 I just wanted to do something that was in character for Pinkie Pie.
I really want to say "you have been unforgivened" here, but I'm afraid nobody would get the reference.
6862056 That's what happens when Rated Ponystar is your editor and lets you write sad crap.
This is somewhat related to the story but also a bit off topic, but the title makes me think of the song The Unforgiven by Metallica. Badass song. But anyway, awesome story. Almost made me cry. Almost
6984810 Twilight also may or may not have been in love and slept with Discord on one occasion. She tried to have his baby.... it gave her the middle finger right before dying.
6984853 daaaaaamn.
6985278 I kid of course.... or am I?
7574540 MIND OVERLOAD!
The ultimate sacrifice....
Dying to save your friends. Oh Twilight...
*bursts into sobs*
This was very sad…
Great story. Never seen one of these where they actually focus on the aftermath of Twilight giving up her friends.
I do like that it doesn't have everyone forgive Twilight but it isn't overly cruel either. Even if she was justified in her actions, that would be cold comfort for the ponies having to bury their friends and family.