Twilight, Twilight. You don't get it do you? Some offers seem too good to be true. But in the end. You do realize the true nature of our bargain. You saved your friends, but now they are covered in darkness, and you will pay the true price
Found one thing that bugged me o.o at the very end you said she "beating his chest with her fists." I also recon we talked about it being anthro or not but all the way here i've thought it were ponies, So either my mind is fucked up as always, or you wrote fist instead of hoof :p
Hmmm....not bad, I like the start and the fact that Cadence killed Armor, that's a twist. Hmm....maybe you could explain more about the family though and Blueblood, maybe more about the Darkness as well. I'm impressed though so far, I shall read on
Wait wait wait wait...Cadence has that weird Angel thing in her right? And in the end of The Darkness 2, Jackie's girlfriend had the same thing in her. And she was basically evil the whole time, And by the end after you go to hell and find her, She goes all angely and leaves Jackie's ass down there. I'n starting to see something coming together here, With Twily having the Darkness, And Cadence having the weird angel thing. Anyways great story
FINALLY!!! Been a while since I have seen a Darkness fic of any sorts on this site. Much Mustachios to you.
Very nice.
Except now I feel ashamed that I haven't updated my own Darkness fic in a while.
You spoony bard!
Oh hell yes. This is going to be good
Woooo! Darkness!!
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Ha! Now you cross blades with Tandem the Spoony.
Found one thing that bugged me o.o at the very end you said she "beating his chest with her fists." I also recon we talked about it being anthro or not but all the way here i've thought it were ponies, So either my mind is fucked up as always, or you wrote fist instead of hoof :p
3411141 It's f'ed up bro.
3411680 That didn't really give me much of an answer
3411703 It's meant to be a hand bro.
3411705 umm yeah about that, "the unicorn stallion said to the tied up earth pony colt." That dosn't make much sense....
3411729 I'll pm it to you later.
3411733 Do as you wish bro
3411737>>3411705 So much bro between u guys.
3413069 Is that a problem?
3413069 umm yeah, I've helped him out with a few fics and he have helped me xD
Hmmm....not bad, I like the start and the fact that Cadence killed Armor, that's a twist. Hmm....maybe you could explain more about the family though and Blueblood, maybe more about the Darkness as well. I'm impressed though so far, I shall read on
Twilight the Darkness host and Cadance hosting The Angelus. Interesting.
Wait wait wait wait...Cadence has that weird Angel thing in her right?
And in the end of The Darkness 2, Jackie's girlfriend had the same thing in her.
And she was basically evil the whole time,
And by the end after you go to hell and find her,
She goes all angely and leaves Jackie's ass down there.
I'n starting to see something coming together here,
With Twily having the Darkness,
And Cadence having the weird angel thing.
Anyways great story
3409353 There is never to many.