Twilight, Twilight. You don't get it do you? Some offers seem too good to be true. But in the end. You do realize the true nature of our bargain. You saved your friends, but now they are covered in darkness, and you will pay the true price
So.....no big fight and a few small guards? Find that a bit unrealistic myself, all that hype only to be disappointed, shit. Finally, the bad mare goes back to her roots, kill the bitch, for the love of the GODS, kill the bitch!!!! Odd scene with Blueblood, could not have been a flashback, could it have? Who was the filly? Why kill her? For what purpose? And why the buck do the grown mares allow the short dragon to drive a bucking semi? Shit...this is all kinds of confusing, finally, how can Fluttershy give Twilight one of two very important guns, love duel weapons by the way if she's disgusted by dead bodies? Is she not a killer herself? Gods so many questions, so little time. Needs longer chapters, that's for sure NEXT!
3936718 Well that's going to bite her in the ass, with any luck Fluttershy will be the one to do it and Rarity will die but that's just my option
3936780 Maybe but at least she has the sense to get the buck out of there, she's paid her debt, she's not her friend and has no other reason to side with Twi or the others, none of them are heroes and you know what? I'm glad for that, it's realistic...NEXT!
3936715 They have.... traces of her.
3936778 Who said she joined the bad guys? I didn't.
So.....no big fight and a few small guards? Find that a bit unrealistic myself, all that hype only to be disappointed, shit. Finally, the bad mare goes back to her roots, kill the bitch, for the love of the GODS, kill the bitch!!!! Odd scene with Blueblood, could not have been a flashback, could it have? Who was the filly? Why kill her? For what purpose? And why the buck do the grown mares allow the short dragon to drive a bucking semi? Shit...this is all kinds of confusing, finally, how can Fluttershy give Twilight one of two very important guns, love duel weapons by the way if she's disgusted by dead bodies? Is she not a killer herself? Gods so many questions, so little time. Needs longer chapters, that's for sure NEXT!
3936718 Well that's going to bite her in the ass, with any luck Fluttershy will be the one to do it and Rarity will die but that's just my option
3936780 Maybe but at least she has the sense to get the buck out of there, she's paid her debt, she's not her friend and has no other reason to side with Twi or the others, none of them are heroes and you know what? I'm glad for that, it's realistic...NEXT!
Damn good chapter if you ask me, keep up the good work.