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Holy crap, an update?!
Another human in Equestria, another Celestia getting slapped in the face.
Well, that's a nice step forward.
What the bloody HELL was that for? I mean, Sunbutt can be a total bitch sometimes, but you didn't nedd to do that.
Hm. If it had been a punch instead of a slap I'd say Max had been learning from another HiE in particular.
That was one hell of a cliffhanger... I need more pls. Great story as always! Keep it up!
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I'm guessing it has something to do with him learning about both Discord's origins and the motive behind his desire for revenge. You know, the fact that when Riddick accidentally killed someone in self-defense, Celestia ordered Starswirl to turn him into a pony without his consent? Only for the spell to backfire and turn him into a Draconequus instead?
This whole thing, the whole goddamn clusterfuck of a revenge plot never would have happened if Celestia hadn't been holding the idiot ball back then. Granted, we wouldn't have a story, but do you honestly think that the characters in stories like this would care about our entertainment if they were real?
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I'm pretty sure that the only reason he didn't is because, despite everything bad that happened to him, he never would've met Twilight if Celestia hadn't fucked everything up. Although, that doesn't exactly change the fact that she did fuck everything up, thus the slap.
Max just slappin Celestia? Wtf gonna happen next?
Max buddy I love your story but 8 month to update and it's a cliffhanger... I mean you'll take as much time as you need to write what you want but you have to admit that's a dick move.
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Yeah I was gonna say, is Max picking things up from TD?
its alive ALIVE
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Well I wonder how much longer Twilight is going to keep her secret from Celestia? I hope she takes a page out of her brothers book and waits till right before birth! Loved the Planet of the Apes reference and why do I think that Max took a page out of TD’s book on dealing with Celestia being an insensitive idiot?
An update after all this time and you end it on a cliff hanger?
You can't just dog the boys like that man
Tia deserved that, no questions asked.
Edit: Is Primula going to be real then?
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Man, I have been following this for absolute ages, but honestly I forgot just how bad this story was. Way too long, way too disjointed, way too many characters. A classic HiE if I ever read one (I have read many). Thanks for reminding me of all these random ass plot threads I didn't care about a year ago when you last updated. #salt
That slap... yet another fanfic cliche signpost this fic has hit. Can't even be surprised. ...Not to mention a line I imagine this fic has been waiting 700k words to use.
Blind healer discovering the pregnancy before anyone else (not counting eldritch beings) though? ...I got that reference.
Edit: Wait... who was that lying next to Max in the hospital room? I'm drawing a blank on what character that is... only one I could even think of is... oh damn... ...Starswirl?
That ending... I can hear the echo of that slap in the corridors.
I had a strong feeling that Max would get the ability to understand and speak the Equestrian languish.
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This reference and first words for the pony to verbally understand is gold. I mean it is bloody amazing.
Term SAS guards keep triggering me funny way
I keep getting image of guards with SAS insignia - winged blade on shield. That's very Equestria-like crest
Huh, okay.
Max, wtf man XD
Still, really happy to see an update to the story. Been waiting anxiously ever since a friend of mine introduced me to it and i binge read the entire thing over the course of 4 days...
Still again, I'm rather surprised he understands ponies again and can speak, unless harmony did something to him.
Tbh I hate it when a story waits so long to update that you forget 40% of the characters, but this story is good enough that I guess I can reread 10 chapters. I honestly like the beginning of HiE fics because they are simple and don't have so many characters and plotlines, but HEY! What a wonderful kind of day! Where the protagonist reunites with his bae!
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Get on my level. I remember a certain HiE where the guy shot Celly in the head... 2012 was an interesting time.
I love that this story updated! I’m looking foreword to what happens next, I hope you don’t plan to leave us another 8 months after this cliffhanger though, I so want to see Max chewing out Celestia in front of Luna and Twilight
Bitch slapping a princess. Hot damn thats a funny way to end a chapter when will the updates become more regular btw?
continuing my screaming from earlier* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
*stops screaming*
UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE !
I had things planned, but I stopped EVERYTHING when I saw this ! And very glad I did !
This does look like the story is coming to an end, waht with all the "here is what's happening to that character" parts. I'll be both sad and happy when that happens !
Also, now your profile picture makes a lot more sense.
bitch smack the princess whoa dude, love the story and happy for the update
Finally! I have been waiting too long for this! I got to say, I approve of this chapter. Still confused as to why Max slapped Celly, but I’m sure you will explain in the next chapter. Also, welcome back! We have missed you.
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cursing, yelling, insulting, exclamations of "MAX!", questions pointed at celestia that point her in a slightly dimmer light. just a few predictions.
Hmmm
Awesome chapter, now back to the cryotube till the next update.
Celestia deserves that slap. Because
Now someone knows a truth.
Dang it, I want to see the crowd's reaction to Celestia's speech.
Man, that Healer has no tact...
I have lost count of how many 'WHAT!' in this chapter. It's freaking awesome! And Max B-Slapped Celestia!? OOOOOHHHHHH SHIT!!!
But, she deserved it.
KUDOS TO YOU MADMAX! BRAVO!!!
It's honestly been so long I have no idea why he slapped her. :[
Woaw it’s been ao long I honestly have forgotten who most of the characters were. Took me a while to recall based on what they said about them. Awesome to see this being updated tho, now if I could only remember what was that he saw or learned that made him mad at Celestia. I remember a back story of starwirld (I think) discovering the first humans. Or was it someone else? I don’t remember and then I remember Harmory talking to him about a bunch stuff (don’t remember anything they talked about tho). I literally didn’t remember that until he mentioned a tree lol. This story is cool tho, so I’ll re read it when it’s complete.
Wooooow, an update at last? Whew! This is... well, this was quite the chapter, ehehehe, lots of stuff going on! Loose ends to tie up, methinks we're slowly getting into the final stretches of this... mayhaps.
And that final part, fucking lolz... like most have said, it's been so long I've forgotten why Celly was slapped, though I'm sure it's deserving, lol.
Nice.
Lots of Celestia slapping going around fimfiction of late.
Some versions kinda ask for it though.
And then her dentures fell out of her mouth.