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Great chapter.
Its HERE!!!!!! Good chapter, well written, no comment on clop, but good job overall! The changeling was a good touch.
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Dang it you finished the chapter 21 seconds before me!
been wondering when this was gonna update. but for a story this good, I can wait.
I loved this.
great chapter as always
well worth the wait
It has updated.
The update is read.
More is desired.
I enjoyed the sex.
There is little more to say.
canon!
Woooooah what the fuck.
excellent, smithers!
And I think Celestia has an idea, I hope it works. I want Max to talk.
ORBITAL FRIENDSHIP CANNON ONLINE. INITIATING WARM UP CYCLE.
*Imagines it* Heh heh, that's adorable.
AJ's parents?
Max's first words better be either "happy birthday" or "ball so hard motherfuckers wanna fine me".
Then have him recite tongue twisters.
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responsible for the fire that claimed two lives at the farm just outside of Ponyville fifteen years ago
poor applejack.
please continue your magic, mi compardre.
5647421 Vampony.
Great chapter, loved every minute of it, and that ending left me with so many questions that I'm already dying for more.
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A few hours later....
Well worth it as always.
Once again, great job MadMax. Another chapter to peak my interests and hold my attention hostage.
Looks like the story is progressing nicely. I wonder what will happen next?
I really have nothing but the hugest respect for authors that can continually update long stories like this and have those chapters be good. I also have nothing but pity for what the editors do to said author to make them update.
And once again, my socks are blown off. Fantastic job Max.
Well, okay, I've got one problem. Cock is not the right word to use when the sex is emotional like that. I just skimmed it and saw the word jump out at least 4 times. Find something else to make it flow better.
Sleep, not slip. Nice alliteration though. Rolls off the tongue.
Nice progression. Speaking of length, another story I'm reading had a bonus chapter titled "A Short Story"...which was 26,000 words long.
5647681 Hehehe, Bad Mondays?
5647510 Damn it, you beat me to it!
I smell a subplot with AJ...wait, nevermind it was just a fart.
5647476 ??????????????
5647446 Activating Absolute Super Ultimate Chaos Defense Shield.
Another great chapter, can't wait till the next one.
And those feels...
It's also interesting to see that Ivory is a vampony, and a pretty scary one too, and would love to see her some more.
5647446 Quick, we must prime the Helements of Armory!
I'm just wondering why they didn't think of using the elements to begin with?
Nice, things are getting interesting ^^
The "sex" tag was very considerated and funny xD
My english is not the best but... "she would coo in her slip" here: slip should be sleeb, right?
they're going to use the Elements of Harmony on him good job by the way keep it up see you next chapter
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No guarantee that it will work exactly to their benefit, it could instead turn him into a statue like it did with Discord.
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Because the Mane 6 gave them back to the Tree of Harmony at the start of season 4, unless I'm misjudging this fic's equivalent position to canon.
I have a craving for strawberries now for some reason...and I'm deathly allergic...so ya
"Gather the Bearers. We shall use the Elements to cleanse Max."
"But if that doesn't purge the chaos magic, he may be sealed in stone!"
"So the problem will be solved either way."
"Princess!"
"Just imagine all of the uses for a petrified Max..."
"I'll go get the girls. Be right back."
5647855 I think it was mentioned somewhere by Max this this takes place between season 3 and 4, or at least that's where it started then followed its own timeline from there.
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Bingo
5647458 Here ya go.
" He’s antics and the way he treats us. "
He's
His
I'm still wondering what role the changelings will play. Obviously, they like Max.
5647467 The significance wasn't lost on me, either. Of course, that would mean that Apple Bloom is 15 years old.
It's good to see the two actually expressing their attraction towards each other. But I feel the need to request this: please, PLEASE move the plot forward more? I mean, we know HOW our "little human" got here. We don't really know why Discord did it, we don't know how the rest of humanity got here and how they ended up like this, we don't know what our main antagonist really wants, there's still a LOT of questions left unanswered, and well...this story is over fifty chapters long AND almost half a million words now. Seriously. It has almost reached the 500K word mark.
Gods I hope those changelings stick around. I forsee many shenannigans with them.
Y'know, I think Ivory might just be my favorite of the Coming Dawn crew.
5648039 Well, since he doesn't have the charger with him anyways, it doesn't really matter.
And that's still assuming it would even fit an Equestrian outlet, Britain and France have different outlet ports, and they're right next to each other.
5647907 wow
I would say it was worth the wait. But that implies I'm okay with having to wait for more chapters and that I don't constantly check my feed (and the fic in case I missed the notification) to see if this has updated. Either way, I still want more. Naow.
I remember that. In that other fic.
So yeah, keep up the good work.