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4918096 people seem to have a bone-to-pick with like the oddest things on this story, its so strange, i dont know, they think things are shits for the heck of it, sometimes they are, and sometimes its like no it has a bigger meaning, you have to take a step back and see the bigger picture, i find it amusing xD
And the plot thickens. I wonder how Max will take Twilight's Eventual Confession. Only 4 Chapters till then!
Potion Poker=Strip Poker
Seems legit.
The moment I read that the woman was in heat, I was really hoping for this to happen
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4921213 Nah, that's planned for one of the side chapters of the story. Along with other things that didn't make it into the final cut.
Lol! Just.. No just Rofl!
Good play. That should teach them not to do things before their time!
Wake up and.... Smell the... Ashes
Welp, now I guess I have to stop Doing Stuff™ to read the newest chapter.
This 52 chapter story so far was awesome and son, I love ya but HOLY F**K CAN THEY JUST KISS ALREADY?!
Also I would like to see more of the female human that appeared in this chapter. I think she would be an interesting addition to the merry band.
KEEP WRITING YOU BEAUTIFUL SON OF A BITCH
4921228 Hurray! Brownie points for you!
4921235 She's back for that very reason.
Silly, reader. No trying to get Max and Twilight together sooner. You'll have to wait, like everyone else.
did you just inadvertently tell us that max and twilight DO indeed hook up?
Oh I'm loving this, especially the deliberate use of a commenters idea, without the intended result.
Genious, pure genious.
4921250 I thought that was a clear given by now, considering past discussions.
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*shrugs* only cause max also just stated "i have no intentions of mating with a human or pony"
Bat pony + fluffy pony?
Best possible thing!
Primrose is the bat pony, right? I get the Maxguards confused, sometimes.
That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
I loved this chapter. The random potion driinking for the card game was brilliant.
4921269 In the story (as well as in real life), Max says a lot of things he doesn't mean. Like, "sure that dress doesn't make you look fat" and "Yes, Bassie, I'll pay you back the forty bucks I owe you".
4921292 It was more like $35 and you know it.
I found it hilarious to see how desperate the mares were willing to go for Max and the other human attempting to mate with Max. I hope that the human girl reappears next chapter.
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*shrugs* maybe, its difficult to get into maxes head from a psychological stand point. the abuse he has suffered would make any earth human very reluctant to birth a child on this planet, there is also the xenophilia issue to overcome. its one thing to get it on with a humanoid, its another to get it on with something that isnt even remotely close to human in appearance; especially when said species abuse your species. so does he say things he doesnt mean? sure sometimes, who doesnt? but the drive to procreate on this planet that is a far more abusive then your own and to mate with something that thinks your species is unintelligent does make that decision a tad more difficult.
Just a minor spelling error I saw on my second read-through. Fairly easy to correct.
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You appear to assume it will be Twilight's confession. Twilight's feelings could be revealed in response to a confession by Max.
4921329 Thank you.
4921246 think there will be any humans from our earth in this story sometime in the future?
4921344 Or a third party revealing said feelings; a slip of the tongue from Cadence or Rarity, for instance.
4921221 You could always do the emotional roller coaster of Max having sex with a human before Twilight. You know, strain the relationships. He is the Oblivious King after all.
4921246 First you had my curiosity...Now, you have my attention... I shall be waiting...
4921378 If I remember correctly, there was one in the last chapter.
Damn good chapter sir.I liked the mystery of not knowing when Twi's feelings would be revealed, though....
Half a million... Per mare.... Now we're talking Royal Budget territory! Think Celestia would go for it?
Still, I was a bit surprised Twilight didn't do a bit of tail -flagging herself when he practically groped her. Someone out there has written a scene like that that ended quite differently.....
Keep going! ;)
4921269 oh, we're sure that by the end of this there will be an addendum to that statement. Something like," except Twilight".
You arent going to have him suffer the permenant effects of the poison, are you? Because that would just taint evrrything he does after it.
Damn, Max is one cold motherfucker. That poor girl walks, WALKS, all the way from Canterlot and he just sends her to the pound. Best case scenario, she's got an owner who treats her right who'll come pick her up. If not Applejacks' going to pick her up and that means she'll get branded and locked in a pen. Poor little human.
If they keep raising the price every time a mare gets enough bits by the end of this story Max will cost a few million bits most likely more.
4921235 They already kissed. But only Max remember it.
lookin forward to yer next chap
i pull out the fabled item the ring of author control "now let the love confession begin"
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That the bare minimum you are leaving out the fact that it also is foreshadowing both Max being the pawn that becomes a 'king' and the fact that there is a direct and strong connection between Max and Discord. After 410,500 words across forty five chapters that second thing is only foreshadowed twice. And it is a pretty significant thing.
4921690 I use it's counter and protect the author
4921796 darn its only weakness well guess im off to find a time machine
The Oblivious King or the Mad God.
Heh, I love that. Ominous titles we know not what they mean or what they represent. Much like my fic and its title (which I will not put so I may not be accused of advertising). Names for consequences yet to come and be rendered upon the masses or the select few. Your personal hell, detached from life via sacrifice for the greater good, or some other unconvinced consequence?
I JUST LOVE THAT.
I just want you to know I'm currently raving like a starving madman for more...oh wait Lyra beat me to that.
Beautiful. I made the mistake of accidentally discovering that this story has a progress bar on your page. Now I may or may not be checking it a "few" times a day. Easily my favorite on-going series right now.
xDD i gotta say this chapter was amusing as fuck and i loved it, pardon my french, ended siding with avera through most of my reactions, probably enjoying this a bit too much but this story has my full attention, it comes with the package haha, twilight getting off at being her human made me chuckle, its so amusing when she shows control like that, shes usually a good girl Loved the tension so much tension, she deserves it, just couldnt stop smiling, enjoyed this chapter from start to finish, as it flows pretty well and thickens the plot a bit aaah man, enjoying it, good stuff
4921292 i'm starting to see a pattern here :p
4921290 yea that was a good one :P
4921269 i was actually worried about that, KNOWING people are gonna take it way too literally and think oh he's a hypcrite or he's contradicting himself, no thats his view at the time, its static, things change!
4921179 who knows even then, Max could be the one coming out and saying something to twilight, ya never know
okay i'm done haha, dont mean to spam xD