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I'm going to ask, before I even read the chapter: Is this an April Fool's Day joke? Because, by my clock, it was posted literally minutes into the 1st of April, and I would much rather skip over as many of the day's "festivities" as possible.
7083184 No. I do not believe in posting fake chapters. I will never post an April Fool's chapter.
daaaaaaaaaaamn.
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Max will make a Vaal-iant effort, I'm sure.
You...you...you can't just LEAVE it at that!!! Such a cliffhanger!
I hope Max murders the twisted fuck...
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I like April Fools chapters, so long as they are clearly labelled.
Need to get up in five hours for work... See an update... Meh sleep is overrated anyway
Interesting take...
Hey an update.
Half an hour later.
I wish i just waited for next chapter since thats a too big cliffhanger.
Btw seems you got the story back on track after the *unfortunly* chapters prior.
Ok MadMaxtheBlack Im gonna ask this once... Akame Ga Kill??!?!?!
I actually got fucking giddy when I saw this is my feed.
7083331 Look at that picture and then get a teddy saying "I love you!"
Oh my gosh. A fight to the death in limbo?
Or the mind...
Or wherever it is they are...
I think they're in a waiting room while the Elements of Harmony sorts them out or something. Anyways, great chapter Max! I love this story! Keep up the good work, even if it is ending soon... *sniffle*
Holy. Fucking. SHIT!!!! Fucking bombshell and a nuke dropped on our heads!!! No wonder he was able to cause a self destruction sequence in that lab. Holy fucking damn!!! I applaud you sir! Did not see any of that coming!
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And then Twilight un-stones Max, and Max decapitates the Discord statue.
7083393 None. He's a filthy casual.
CLIFFHANGER!!! MadMaxtheBlack, why there?
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Is that Max's axe, or just a generic axe?
Please tell me you're almost done with the next chapter! I can't stand a hypeboner this big!
nice Aliens/MKX ref.
A pitcher vs a stone? How about a baseball player vs a lava monster
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7083417 That's up to the reader's interpretation. Personally, I'd like to believe it's Max's axe, sent to him through the combined will of his friends.
The sight of it will surely fill him with D E T E R M I N A T I O N!
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7083190 amen to that, I really hate those kind of chapters
Big daddy to Giant Dad.
well, shit.......
I'm curious about Max's full name. What significance does it have?
Also...
Are you referencing what I think you're referencing with that entire scene?
7083261 Honestly...I'm siding with Discord after learning his backstory. Celestia was way out of line!
7083585 Except we're only hearing one side of the story. Cold War scientists aren't exactly known for their sanity. For all we know, maybe Paul doesn't actually know what he's talking about. And even so, you know what they say about an eye for an eye. Whatever actions Celestia took millenia ago does not justify the atrocities that Dr Riddick has freely admitted to.
Now MY question for MaxtheBlack is: what the f***ing HELL did the guy mean about his comment about Star Swirl "looking forward to being a mother"? Was she with child when he did something horrible to her, or was it just that she was trying for kids on got genderbend something awful?
Fuck off, Reddit.
HUZZAH!!! MY WEEK OF CONSTANTLY MASHING THE REFRESH BUTTON HAS PAID OFF!!!
It seems as though everything will come to a head in the next chapter...
In the meantime, I'll just leave this here...
I actually hope, he does get his revenge on Celestia. The vengeful type, just like me.
7083190 Thank you so freaking much. I hate authors who do that shit.
7083445 someone was referencing a certain strategy game... Methinks ... Command and conquer red alert with the chronosphere amirite?
That, that is a thing. A thing that happened. And I am not sure what to make of it. I guess we'll see what happens next. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Holy beep beep you really think we'd wrote swear words?!!!!
I mean, we knew Discord had something to do with the humans, but this?!? Their heritage makes so much sense now!
And that backstory.... Well, some guys just can't take the heat I guess...
Discord's still a dick though. Gender bending can be fun, but not when done so maliciously....
Keep going! ;)
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stayclassy
Maybe we can build a fire, Hudson. Sing some bucking songs!
Oh god. I can't read past this. It's just too funny. Of god my sides. I think I'm dying, I can't stop laughing!
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Star Swirl was pregnant, Discors genderbenr her. Guess where the baby goes.
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Best chapter yet.
While I like the story immensely, like the way Max and Twilight interact, and admit the twist here DOES explain quite a bit...
It still doesn't quite make up for the mistakes the story had on display before. Especially the whole "beaten without any kind of real fight" thing people were annoyed with. Also, here's probably the biggest mistake. I've seen comic book writers do this too. Even I'VE done it before. A writer will WANT a character to be in a certain place. But because that place doesn't make a lot of sense given what we know of their backstory and personality, they instead have to ALTER their personality to fit the scenario they craft. Not a case of them "adapting in a different way that makes them change naturally in a way that'd make sense" but "outright forceful change". It's like...say...Maxwell Lord from DC Comics. When he was first introduced, he was a mover and a shaker and KINDA smarmy and sleazy sometimes, but we could tell he really cared about the Justice League. All the evidence showed that. He even had his mind read when he was asleep and we knew that, for all his flaws, he cared. But then the writers turned him evil and all "Oh I was never your friend, you're all too dangerous, you need to be stopped" and made him into a murderer.
Discord comes off as the Maxwell Lord of this story. His behavior, actions and attitude make no sense given how we've seen him in the show, and you've drastically altered his origin, personality and darn near everything about him but his powers to get him to the place you want him to be. As such, I don't find it believable. I just find it forced. It makes no sense given what we've seen of him in the show. And it COULD have been forgiven if this was done in a season BEFORE Fluttershy made friends with him, then it would make some sense because "Okay, he hasn't learned his lesson, of COURSE he's still bad"...but you didn't go that route.
So I'm sorry, but...this is a big flaw for me.
I shall call him Hudson.
Also, nuke the site from orbit, it's the only way to be sure.
So much was finally explained!! Yes!!
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Also: He spends the entire story plotting how to get phenomenal cosmic power, but once he has it he pretty much just turns into a giant and hits things.
And so it all is finally coming to light... very veryi interesting indeed...
Bravo man, bravo.
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That is true, I kinda expected like, I dunno, him playing dolls with the ponies of Canterlot or turning pieces of it into chocolate and eating it, something more WEIRD.
7083913 Your a little bit late I 7083840 got here first