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This protagonist is just stupid. Why he cant show some intellect? This story is written incorrectly.
I like the way this story has gone so far. You did a really good job on Twilight's character.
YAY! New Chapter! I really Enjoy this Story.
Toy? For Humans?
O... M... C! (Oh My Celestia)
I have another important Question: Will he ever be able to Talk to them?
I understand the whole bet deal, but this story is starting to annoy me. I want to like it, I really do, but I do not know how longer I can make it with him being so submissive and oblivious.
Why he cant talk?
...still can talk
OMG JUST LET HIM TALK ALREADY.
Good story. Very good.
Well at least he actually attempted to make a run for it and to try and find a way out. Now if he could just find a way to either speak or use something like a snort at someone else's joke or an eye roll at something stupid with loud "pffft" to match at somebody else's stupid ideas then they might notice "hey, I think it UNDERSTANDS us".
Madmaxtheblack when do u update this story?
If you ask me why he have not said anything yet is becouse if he act like a "dumb" average human he can have a chance to get some info before he try to make himself known and talk to the ponies. Sure he can maybe act a little like angel bunny or something and make some noise or show emotions or gestures but I think most humans don't say much. Are like cattle. Get that feeling what I have read so far. And try to show aggressiveness or obstinacy... Not a good ide
So I think he bid his time until he can try to comunicate with the ponies. I think he have a feeling if he talk or show that he is more intelligent than the rest of the human, he will be exerimented on (he think that what humans would do to a talking pony if he where on earth)
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Still waiting for the human to talk...
I am very much enjoying this story. I am looking forward to Max trying to communicate with the ponies without speech, since his vocal cords were damaged on arrival into Equestria.
2900734 Eventually...all in due time...
2901159 Fridays. Earlier if I get them out in time...
2900799 2901049 2902106 ♫ Two more chapters!!! ♫
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The picture seems to be extremly fitting.
2903219 thanks for telling me. If I may ask what gave ou the idea for this story?
2904686 My friends and I were talking one day about the tales our pets could tell if they were intelligent enough. One thing lead to another, a bet was made and the story was born. I wish I could give you more details, but most of it was spur of the moment stuff...
2903213 Take as much time as you need. Some of us can wait, I know I can.
2904781 I really like we're this is going! Please continue
this is really interesting. More Dash
once again nice chapter
Nice story so far. it has some flaws, but it's good for what it is. What's funny is that, despite that ponies see humans as humans like cats and dogs, they seem to have a hidden desires to commit sexual acts with these 'animals', as seen with Sunny and Twilight. It'll be interesting to see what happens from here with our naked and silent human protagonist.
A QUILL AND PARCHMENT, MY KINGDOM FOR A QUILL AND PARCHMENT!!
the evil. the broken souls. the lost hope. i like it
“I’ll have to stop by the human story and pick up some supplies as well. He’ll need a bed, some food, some health care items, and maybe even some toys. I nearly choked on a piece of apple at that. Toys? What the hell kind of toys would there be for a human? A ball? Frisbee? Maybe a feather on a string?
i assume you mean the human STORE. Also you need to add quotation marks.
love your story btw
Spike’s eyes light up light diamonds.
Couldn't help but point this out.
3300267 Thank you for the find!
Silly i, you don't go there
3468024 Thank you for alerting us, citizen. The i has been detained and is awaiting trial. Have a nice day...
umm about the "why doesn't he talk yet, maybe his throat is still sore. its only been about 2 days since he left the train.
2900714 Because the author is playing with what would happen in all these situations that would otherwise be impossible if the protagonist did the sensible and logical things.
3664248 something happened to it when he was pulled into the desert. like the magic of it burned his cords
Cheese
2900714 Because you're too busy writing about how stupid you think he is
I can imagine him getting angry at one point and flipping them off with an angry look on his face while in theirs.
If they didn't know that he was intelligent at that point, they certainly would then.
Ya know after looking through some of these comments I have noticed a great deal of things
1. First, Tulip he is not Unintelligent nor is he a Genius, take in the matter that he works at a fast food establishment, and also he has proven that he is smart enough to understand that he would show a higher amount of intelligence he would most probably have been put into a horrid situation also if you could do better then Mister MadMaxtheBlack please do I would love to read it.
2. Second, That amount of people complaining about Max being mute is annoying because technicality he is having a form of dialogue whit himself, but back to the point at hand about him being mute is a important part of the story (I am assuming,I have been keeping updated with the story) and adds a form of character depth.
3. Third, Mister MadMaxtheBlack this is a amazing story and I give you a personal thanks for writing it!
Five chapters in and I'm hooked. I fave.
I'm enjoying the story so far. Max is a little less aggressive than I would have been in displaying my intelligence, but that doesn't bother me too much.
If I had to nitpick, I'd say just work on your grammar a little bit.
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damit now i miss my blue rubber bouncy ball i had when i was 10 that was my fav toy id bounce that thing for hours
Is that voice in the protagonists head just the Max's own mind becoming a split personality, or is there some other mental force keeping him in check?
Sorry, I know it's already written, but I just started this story recently, and had to voice my questions now.
Now I'm just certainly sure that this "voice" in his head is NOT his own, more likely it is indeed our lord of chaos Dicord giving him those "bad ideas".
This stinks like rotten mackerels, surely it's him no doubt!
3845534 I wouldn't say that, that type of thing is impossible, it's just two streams of logic arguing and he's interpreting.
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You do realize that discord is a professional at being impossible right?
Awesome chapter, especially with all this magic stuff kind of explained. Fucking loving it, Spike fears him... That's a story in itself I guess.
Erm... The whole Darkness thing might have been me trying to scare some sense into him. Nightmares are my specialty.
Y'know, he needs to talk. I'll read the whole story, but if he doesn't talk through the whole thing, the you, sir, have earned a dislike.
3951973 The story will explain why he can't talk so don't dislike just yet