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A chapter update of your hhuman and you and a new story by Realitycheck...
Ebony, this is a red letter day
Well if there's no max in this chapter then I'm in no hurry to read it. However, it doesn't mean I won't read it. It's just not as fun without Max. Oh well it's for the best I need sleep for another early shift.
Wow. This is really fucking morbid. Personally I enjoy the fluffier bits of this story a lot more than parts like this. That being said, good chapter, I can't wait for the next one.
So only one more Chappy until the reveal. I am so excited
5057420 most majestic gif ever
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I called it
I fucking called it
All of this intense intrest on TwiMax was a slight distraction from the true danger that was coming
And now that it has, it's terrifying.
5057511 majestic as fuck.
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That's a lot better than Twilight's usual dancing.
I see that someone's watched Oceans 11.
WHAT? NO MAX!?? but I totally thought this would be the chapter where twilight confessed her love....AGH! so aggravating..and I rushed home to read this too
Now that's a quote.
Also, these guards are incompetent fools- Sunny's the one with some sense in that party. What's her Wisdom at?
That Discorded Golden though; the Archmage sure knows how to pick 'em!
Only one more?
5057420 fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/268/2/f/funny_by_demorgorgon-d80jb68.jpg THE END
Hold on.
Is...is that the same human chick that was in Ponyville? And the fighting ring?! I could've sworn she kicked it in the arena. The plot thickens!
I won't lie , and this is in now way meant to insult the fine Mr. Author, but I've literally skipped all of the bits that didn't involve Max. I'm a huge fan of those slice of life bits with Max but I have no idea what's going on behind the scenes. Apparently the Archmage is a bad guy or something...
Anyway, this is bad because I have a feeling these bits and the Max bits are about to become one big mess of bits.
Christ..
I was hoping Withers would've gotten out of that..
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>Get out of shower
>Read update
>alliswell.jpg
>Human Research Facility
>Glorious bastard
>At loss for words
>Turn for the worst
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>Only hope is that this counts towards the relationship reveal, that these horrors may not be in vain
Is it just me, or does the Archmage almost remind anyone else of Randall Flagg.
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5057690 yeah, (just incase this is a spoiler so don't read ahead of this if you don't want to know. Seriously why are still reading, I think I heared the microwave bing, so go and get that. Some people huh. Anyway..... Oh before I forget Hi Dan) The archmage is none other than Discord is disguise. Dun dun dun
But that human seems familiar she is totally the same human that was in ponyville and the one max killed in the pit. The question is how? Probably discord
Anyway can't wait till next "Max" chapter, not saying the ones without him are not good, on the contrary . But that being said it's just not the same.
so.... is the arch mage a human with a huge stock of that transformation potion?
now all i want now is max to go all big daddy on some bad unicorns
Goddamn max. That is one horrible way to die. I'm scared to ask but did you come up with that? Because if you did congratulations you have fueled my needle phobia to nightmare levels.
5057818 October's coming...
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5057741 yep he does remind me of that gloriously evil bastard....now I need fan art of Max as Roland.
I had to opt out of this chapter, I'm sorry and I feel bad about it, but it's hard for me to read a chapter that doesn't really focus much on the main main characters.
I get Sunny's story is probably going to entwine with Max and Twilight's later, but I don't have the attention for it right now.
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I haven't even started reading this yet, woe is me (?) I need to catch up badly.
Oh, well, crap. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
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I'm not gonna be able to sleep tonight.
I'm serious too. I'm going back to the earlier, less morbid and more humorous chapters to get my mind off of this..
5057878 Do you need a hug?
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I'm into human stories but i tend to avoid anything with the sex tag, Hows this story handle that? should i read it? do you recommend?
The chapter was intense. The Archmage's plan to capture the humans and fool the Coming Dawn was brilliant. Still, I'm sad about Withers' death, as it was horrible for her and emotionally devasta thing given who her executor was.
While I didn't dislike the chapter, I have to say that this while side arc involving Sunny is.... Boring. And forgettable. This is one of my favorite stories, and I reckon it's pretty close to over. So... I WANT SOME GODDAMN MAXxTWILIGHT!
You must get your sick kicks by teasing us so.
A story almost as long as my own? Sounds interesting! I shall read this story and post comments!
They need detectives badly... They should've been thinking this long before the night of the stake out so that they could cover all their bases... Just goes to show you, good old fashioned human paranoia goes a long way.
It's been obvious for a while now that the archmage is planning something; we don't know what but we expect it. Poor Witty, she sounded so sweet and she was making a real breakthrough with Zane. Blood calls to blood, avenge her!
I'm sure I'm missing tons of important plot points, but I almost always just skim these side chapters, mainly because I'm confident that at some point, Twilight and Max will eventually be confronted with - if not with what happened here, then certainly the repercussions of - the chapter's events.
5057887 A hug would be nice.
Dangit Discord! Stop being so damn cunning !
So that ties up the hole in the mountain plot portion. What are they going to do with a bunch of awakening humans though? Hmm...
Keep going! ;)
5057900 So far, the only things related overtly to sex have been from Mrs. Cake, and even then, no actual sex has yet occurred in the story.
You started it. I called it like 20 chapters back. Sunny and Stacker ship!!
5057900 there has been no outright sex up to this point, a hell of a lot of innuendo, most of it pretty darn hilarious, but again no actual sex.
5057900 in short ( I accidently delete a previous reply to you ) there has not been any sex scenes, just tons of hinting at it. Now go forth and read a few chapters and see if this story interests you.
Okay, just finished the story.
So not only is Stacker related to Derpy/Ditzy (whatever your prefer to caller her) and Dinky, but Sunny's big brother is Soarin? Okay, at some point you HAVE to have them all meeting up lol.
On to the more serious portion of the story, I must say that was intensely dark. The Archmage (possibly Discord, but I have a theory about that) is indeed the Devil. I love the fact that the title of this chapter "The Greatest Trick..." has a dual meaning: in relation to the story, it was a 'great trick' to fool the Coming Dawn; in a broader sense, it's part of a quote from the movie "The Usual Suspects" (To quote the character Roger "Verbal" Kint: The greatest trick the Devil ever pulled was convincing the world he didn't exist.)
As for my theory about Archmage Discord.... I think it is NOT the Discord stuck as a statue. I believe that Discord might've been split into two halves after Celestia and Luna used the Elements of Harmony so many years ago (one half being the mercurial trickster who can be somewhat redeemed, who we know best from the cartoons; the other half pure calculating evil, certainly a threat worthy enough of two princesses and a magical McGuffin). They used to be one individual but now they are separate. Of course, I am more than likely wrong, but that's what I will think until proven otherwise.
Anyways, great chapter!
Poor Withers, wretched way to go.
Rule one: As soon as you this, or anything like it, things will inevitably become worse.
5057900 Yep, no seks here. Just mares trying to....oh hell,just read it. It's full of lulz