I will be frank, that was a terrible ending. All this trouble you go through and you just let him permanently die? Not even proper closure. I enjoyed the story too much, I was always excited for updates but you just chopped me down with the ending.

2688817 completely agree. but I do see it form the other side, it's supposed to be a "happy ending" and what kind of happiness would there be with a tyrannical ruler like Spike?

but again, it wasn't the ending I was hoping for, c'est la vie. Fin.

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2688817

How do you both think it should have ended?
your right that was a ditch ending

2689612
at this point i'm tried and i'm just going to leave it like that for now, I might do it to it later, but i'm going to work on other things, i'll get back to it later

2689612 Exactly. I see him fluctuate far too frequently between good and evil to die now. He really could become good or become mad with power.
Thank you for doing another ending later.

I like this one far more.

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i'm glad

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oh wow it's been a while since a comment on this story

Oh I just have this thing where I'll go through author I like a lot from the first stories they have to the newest not counting the ones I haven't already read. Now last Date&time:07/29/13 5:54am. I like it a lot. You rock, and yes here comes spam like the other comments I made. Probably on the the rest of yours. Prepare for trouble and make it double. 30 points if you know the reference. Which you should. If you like pokemon. I just gave it away. Insomnia powers active. Hopefully I'll stay awake through today.

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i don't understand your question

Cool story their should have been more viewers

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next to my grammar and no real storyline, as well as being a new author at the time, there were plenty of reason, i'm just glad it turned out as well as it did, if i edited it again, it'd probably have a few more chapters

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I wish this had a sequel

3474260 oh
Well then...
I only said that because I skeeter hear of earlier seasons of mlp being terrible or having some seriously crazy or dark stuff going I....

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i need to reedit this, but that's a long time away

Interesting idea, poor execution.

Throwaway ending... I liked the rest of this however... (debates with self on faving)

I dislike the ending...
But this is my favorite story ever
Third time reading this...

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yay

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that's sadly not going to happen

3970280 NUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!

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i have too many stories lined up after Scootaloo's Master which will be quite the bit of writing, if i run out of them, i'll do a squeal, but the chances of that are very low, so don't plan on it

3970405 Okay, my life would be over until this sequel happens.
There is literally no other story thats complete that I like as much as this.
The story is just GAH

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what about it do you like? it wasn't exactly a major break through in writing

3972631 3972631 This is literally the only story with this type of theme that I have seen on this site.
... That, and it ended a little weird.
Seffron clearly has enough power to go to that white room that Pinkie banished herself to, and that means he has enough power to do other things. He just cant do any tree of life powers, so he cant revive himself as fast as he could have.
The sequel i would have been asking fore was either a prequel, explaining exactly what happened to spike in his world.
Plus, I like spike and think he deserves to have a figure like this in fics.
None of that uselessness nonsense.

3972631 Also...
You write the ALLEY MARE!
Followed.

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yay
also i am writing a prequel to it, i've just been lazy and didn't get more than 5k. That is low on my priorities so yeah. Try reading Scootaloo's Master, it's more, well managed than this.

Glorious

Now that I've finished reading what's here so far of 'Scootaloo's Master,' (grr that cliffhanger!!! ) Would this story be anything similar-ish?

6647332 this story is more of an off the wall completely unedited by any decent editor and has no real story, just more of something i wrote for fun, it's all over the place, but not near the lvl of scootaloo's master

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Fair enough

6648071 So you have any suggestions then?

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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/33893/tarnished-silver
this story and all it's squeals are amazing, these are what i'd suggest

6652465 Coolieo thx!

can there be a sequel please? i feel like it could be open to one, with twilight and everyone wanting him and pinkie back and then getting them back somehow, i dont know, i just feel like it could happen...

great story! loved it from the start to the finish!

8097239 sorry there's not going to be another, but i'm glad you liked it

Ok

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love the story, and i think it should have ended much darker, him having to consume his mother's "Filth" to kill her, and because of it he goes back to being dark as all hell and starts torturing the world

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i had planned on having spike die in the end, but changed it at some point