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thesilentpony


Darkness will always end up out lasting the light.

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Is it just me, or do your stories always have them enjoy it by the end?...

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not always, but that's generally what i like to write, so yes, yes they do hahahaha
no not really, i just haven't felt like writing one like that yet, i might now though

:pinkiehappy: I love it!
:pinkiecrazy: Its hard to find a story like this (Perfect HunterxPrey sex, with gory ending that doesn't make you feel bad or sick) and the last time I saw something similar was years ago.
:moustache: Please keep up the epic work my good sir.

Yours truly... NecromancerX69

Ps... :ajbemused: I don't like sex/gore stories. :pinkiesmile: But this... I am ok with this.
Ps2... :pinkiecrazy: I am watching you.
Edit.
Silly me, you were already on my watch list.

2744326 so the dragon et her rather then keep a happy sex slave? What a waste.

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thank you :D
very much love your comment

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that thought did cross my mind

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:twilightblush: Then why not make an alternative ending with more hot steamy sex?
:pinkiecrazy: With extra rape sauce.

So... in this world no one cares? Okay then. Why would you make a tragic ending like this? Especially with her loving it? I'm not sure that makes sense. My disbelief is not suspended here. :unsuresweetie:

Needs a minor editing pass, I saw a few errors in there.

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since i had a number of you ask i'll make an alternate ending, might take a while but i'll get to it sooner or later

well it's the meddle age, master and the slave was very commen in that time.

Some say that the slave can become more than a slave, hell if he was that type of drgon that can get anything kocnked up than well let just hope there both plant eater and meat eater.

:pinkiehappy: You did it and it was glorious!
:pinkiecrazy: Please keep up the epic work my friend.

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actually i consider mlp to be more in the 1800's era because of the train, electricity and computers since most of that came around that era, plus they had motion pictures so

2769903 ture, but hey it's a cartoon 50% of the time it dis make sence.

Anyway good read here

OK then, time to un-fav.


I faved because I wanted to see alt ending, but this is still a good fic.

oh gawd humanized rainbow dash looks badass as my avatar

Oh, oh come on!

We even get an alt-ending, and such a PERFECT scenario doesn't even finish with vore?!

The whole thing is PREDICATED on the idea that the dragon wants her because she's a CRYSTAL pony, and wants to EAT her!

Okay, fine, slit her throat, but show some finality about how she feels herself fading as the dragon slides her body smoothly down his gullet and into oblivion.

What a wasted opportunity for something that was so tantalizing...

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oh.... well then i offer you to do better, i would most certainly read it, but that thought never crossed my mind so yeah

2808770 I-I-I liked this end b-better *blush*

3055013 it's because watching her die is so sad, but the sex slave ending is kinda sexy.

3055043 *blush* I-I should go...

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if you stick around i am about to post another story hehe, after it gets accepted

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I am going to be blunt about it.

Is there going to be a sequel in any way, shape, or form?

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I would suggest it, as people are asking for one, but, eh, do what you will.

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no one has asked for one, and even if someone did i honestly have no clue exactly where i'd take this

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Skype calls. People say a lot in them, which is how I found this.

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yet again no clue where i'd take this

The alternate ending works so much better... I mean seriously it does.

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that's what i was told by like twenty people

5212674 Doesn't make it any less true.

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yeah i don't think i will, this story never was intended to have one

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Well, I really liked the Alternative ending and I was hoping the dragon would have giving the family she wanted.

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