When Spike takes a walk through Everfree forest in search of gems, he comes across a cave. Flash backs of his past are revealed to him through a mirror. Hatred overtakes him. Can Celestia come to peace with him? Or will Spike forever be consumed in hatred?
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Will read tommorow, got to go to bed.
(Looks promising!)
rather this be a revenge fic but this wroks
out of 10
If this was longer and more detailed I would probably fave it....
(Hint hint)
Interesting, could have been longer but all in all a good fic.
Several typos, bad capitalization and wall-of-text in the very first paragraph. Yeah, pretty sure I'm not going to be reading this.
....... that was... short...
i see where this is going.
Celestia you are fucked up.
the ending was too abrupt for me. Plus it looked super rushed in such a short amount of words. ill give it a like but no fave.
6 out of 10 for Sad
1 out of 10 for Crossover (I honestly don't see why this is tagged as one. AU suits it better.)
8 out of 10 for Adventure
7 out of 10 for grammar
6 out of 10 for overall story.
It was one of my very first stories. I've been getting a lot better at the pacing.
Who does Celestia think she is? Lord Voldemort?
Emerald, sapphire and ruby???
HOENN CONFIRMED!!!1!
Oh, wait. It's already confirmed.
Damn, no Spike and Momestia? A shame. A few errors but it's an old story. Not to bad.
I loved the story. Could've used a little Spike and Momlestia though. Not really keen on the whole 'friend' shtick.