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On the morning of Hearts and Hooves day, Spike doesn't feel like he deserves the love his wife Applebloom gives him, so he tries to think of something to do for her that will show her how much he cares for her.

(One Shot)
(Just a little Spikebloom fic, hope ya like :D)
(My friend Autobot Lancewing looked this over and edited it.)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

I may prefer the SpikeBelle pairing, but this is a pretty good story. Keep up the great work.

Wow. I knew this was coming, but it outdid my expectations. Nice work.

Riz
Riz #3 · Feb 15th, 2014 · · 1 ·

So I take that Applewood is one of the Apple's cousins ?

3948147 Yes he is. He's Braeburn's brother.

Aww...That's adorable! :yay:

Spikebloom FTW. Great story, very heart warming. Have a moustache! :moustache:

Awww that's cute.

Rate: :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:/5

While the main story is good I do have a few.......thoughts about some of the pairings......mostly the the changeling thing, I can deal with the OC but.......that just doesn't make whole lotta sense

3974281 In my head canon, there are also good Changelings, and Applejack met one, they fell in love and- yeah...

I'm thinking about doing another one shot about two good Changelings, but it'd most likely be anthropomorphic.

hmmm just a few questions.....
why would AJ leave ponyville? just doesn't make since.
so twi is living all the way in canterlot away from her friends? can't see that happening either.
And ponies and dragons can have kids. there a mix between the two. called-kirin.

4096456 Applejack left because of her husband's work as an ambassador. Big Macintosh's family looks after Sweet Apple Acres.

Twilight left due to her royal duties constantly calling her away to Canterlot, which was not only an inconvenience, but she hardly had any time for her family.

I understand, but in my head canon it's very difficult and VERY unlikely.

There are three reasons I'm going to add this to my favorites:

1) it's a feel good story
2) I'm loving the background shippings (especially the shipping between Applejack and the changeling, which I have never come across)
3) I absolutely loved, that you used "hay bacon" I just love it when people use hay bacon! Why doesn't hay bacon have it's own cook book? Maybe it's because hay bacon doesn't need one. I mean, you can put it on salad...SALAD!

Well I'm a sucker for anything that makes me go Awwwww.
So have a fave.

Although I'm a Spike X Rarity shipper, I have to say that was one of the best romantic fanfics I've read! Great pacing and dialogue!

Ermagod... This is so good even FelixTheBrony approves!! Theres not a lot of SpikeBloom fanfics, so this is definitely worth a read!!

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