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wat.
well, this certainly seems origional, and rater funny (awkward and dangerous)
................................... not the best clop i've ever read, there's hardly any reason behind it and it skipped a bit.
Eh
*jawdrop*
This story has progressed really fast so far. I like your concept, but it needs more description and more time for the story to develop. Thumbs up, but please slow the story down!
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I'm not a very good writer so whatever I put on this site is to try and improve myself, I never have been good at writing-specifically at having plots or detailing.
I used to be better at writing individual sex scenes but it's basically all just stick + hole or hole + hole = needs a stick.
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Sex need's a reason? okay, I'll try and be better later on but odd's are for this I'm going to continue to suck. I can't develop plots at all and when I write it means I have nothing better to do so I'm not focused at all.
328486 *twich* can i PLEEEEASE kill him?
sorry, but no, not even he deserves what you would do.
<what about me?>
also no.
Can you guys Imagine my delight to getting almost thirty notifications while I'm writing the next chapter of this? My other story has been up for a long time and as obviously awful as it is...
(makes me sick to think of what I've tried to do to it) I expected at least negative comments. Nope, I got nothing in the few weeks it's been out.
Thanks for making me feel good guys.
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I do not understand you but I assume that was meant to hurt my feelings.
328500 no, the one in red is DJ Bl4ck0ut, the incarnation of insanity and cruelty. the one in <these> was ableben... i have no idea what he is, their 2 of my OC's, i have 13. most could kill you with a single attack... DJ could, he just prefers to cause as much pain as possible. the only one who COULDN'T kill you is Killkord, he's just a storywriter.
so i am VERY confusing to argue with, and there are more of me too
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I like insanity, it's the only thing that makes people interesting. Keep up the mental assaults there mate.
328545 i should mention, DJ has a Daughter. his brother is death and he's my uncle, Ableben is my brother.
The story's not bad, but the pacing needs a little work here. Take your time in building up the sex scenes and then deliver them.
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Okay, you can do whatever you want but I'd recommend finding an editor who could really transform this story. You can find some on this site. But, like I said, you can do whatever you want.
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Well if you're interested or know anyone that would be interested in making my pathetic attempts at amusing others not suck so bad than let me know. And I know that probably sounds pretty sarcastic but I don't mean it to be, I seriously hate my "work"
i like it funny concept.
I don't know, I liked it so far. But, i'm a Spike Twilight fan.
Wow.
...Wat...
Ok...
This is good. Once RarityXSpike fans come and see the Rarity one it'll probably be read even more. This is just calling out to SpikeX(Insert pony here) fans.
nice
Wait. I was expecting moar secks.
330923 *Puts on sunglasses* Deal with it. I want some plot to a story that just makes it beter.
Was this translated from an alien language? This is so rushed and forced. I can't believe this has so many thumbs ups.
Why does Spike v2 sound a bit like a stoner?
And so far so good!
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Cus his "Ladywalker" personality is based off my friend Rutter and he, is a dumbass.
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So...he's a womanizer?
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He likes to think that but he's more of just a pervy dick.
Look, if you're a stupid asshole with no standards writing, we know you have to do some kind of wordplay. It's just sitting right there staring at you while your fetal alcohol hands paw at the keyboard. But you, you imbecilic wastes of life, this is maybe the crappiest, sloppiest clopfic "story" you could have made. You slothful, depressing fuck. Look at what you've done. You're so lazy you'd shit into your own hand before you got up and went for a second piece of chocolate cake.
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Actually my other one is worse.
ah..the oblivious one.
And we have The Gentleman...dragon.
Great chapters.
Didn't like it.
Try drawing the chapters out more. Putting an 800 word sex scene in an 850 word chapter can only end in something pitiful.
Amusing idea though.
344880 i like the way you said that.
Start of the story: this is gonna be awesome! Then it just spiraled down into a bunch of short clops with little depth. Not a bad story, but not a good one either. Average.
good idea for a clopfic... you don't mind if i might write one based on this do ya?
I mean: Spike transforms into 6 different versions of himself, all aged and adjusted to be perfectly suited for each of the pony friends... that's an excellent idea...
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Please save this idea from me, this was just awful and needs to be redone by a real writer.
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i not spell can english worth sh*t... and grammar
you give me too much credit
but I mostly thought that the idea coincides with my previous story: "The Tails of Spike's Harem" - Spike shipps with EVERYONE (plus i still can't find most spike&other like guilda without it being rape)
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Is there anything at all with gilda that isn't rape of some sort?
Anyway go ahead it's not like this is copyrighted or anything and it wasn't popular so you won't have anyone yelling that you stole it or anything of the sort.
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well to be perfectly frank... unless you copyright the idea of the story (which there would be many loop-holes around it) there would only be an issue if i use your story or parts of your story without your permission... but i'd never do that
and either way i would've added an author's note saying basically "Inspired by 'The Seven Spikes' by Starkie"
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That's...very polite actually.
I'd like to read your version when it's done.
meh your cancelled story eclipse was better then this
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I think NaturalGlitch really likes you :)
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Best of friends.
Wow.
Spike came freehand?