• Member Since 31st Jan, 2012
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phillipphoenix


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A terrible accident happens, and I end up *One guess where* in Equestria. At first everything seems to be quiet and well and I start to enjoy myself. But at night, I get nightmares telling me of things that will happen to me. At the same time, strange things start to happen in Equestria. It somehow seems to have a connection with me coming here. Let's hope the problems are not here to stay.

This is my first fanfic, so I really hope you guys enjoy! Also I would really like some feedback if you have any :)

It may contain slight romance (nothing explicit at all, just telling) :P

A lot of chapters have been pre-read by my good friend ShadowChilly

---- EDIT ----
On hiatus for now, since I got myself a terrible writers block on this one... It just doesn't seem to flow at all...

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 12 )

This is just.. MAGNIFICENT!
I have nothing to complain about, except the length... But who wouldn't want fanfics that last forever? :pinkiehappy:

Thanks guys!
And here I thought, being new to writing and all, that this would be (maybe not a lousy first try) but maybe not so good again xD
This definitely made my day, and gave me a lot of motivation!
More to come soon! :ajsmug:

I like it so far, nothing to complain either :3 Keep it up man :3 5 star for you:twilightsmile:

I'm enjoying this story. Try to put breaks in every time people talk so you don't end up with a giant paragraph like the last one. Keep up the good work!

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Thanks for that :rainbowlaugh: I'll see into it, and maybe make some fixes to the already published story! :twilightsmile:

why must you leave me at a cliff hangar!? :fluttershysad:
I MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS.

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Cliffhangers are what keeps people coming back! That's why :pinkiehappy:
Thanks for liking it though :twilightsheepish:

If anyone is up for it, I would like someone to be my pre-reader, since the one I have now has very little time. :fluttercry:

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I've gone over the first chapter again to make it more readable.
I've gotten better at formatting text, since I started and also read this nice guide: Ezn's Guide

I hope it's become better :twilightsmile:

382452>>382452 Spinter6 is a good proof-reader he is helping me, and I must say i am very pleased with his work.

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