A terrible accident happens, and I end up *One guess where* in Equestria. At first everything seems to be quiet and well and I start to enjoy myself. But at night, I get nightmares telling me of things that will happen to me. At the same time, strange things start to happen in Equestria. It somehow seems to have a connection with me coming here. Let's hope the problems are not here to stay.
This is my first fanfic, so I really hope you guys enjoy! Also I would really like some feedback if you have any :)
It may contain slight romance (nothing explicit at all, just telling) :P
A lot of chapters have been pre-read by my good friend ShadowChilly
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On hiatus for now, since I got myself a terrible writers block on this one... It just doesn't seem to flow at all...
This is just.. MAGNIFICENT!
I have nothing to complain about, except the length... But who wouldn't want fanfics that last forever?
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Thanks guys!
And here I thought, being new to writing and all, that this would be (maybe not a lousy first try) but maybe not so good again xD
This definitely made my day, and gave me a lot of motivation!
More to come soon!
I like it so far, nothing to complain either :3 Keep it up man :3 5 star for you
I'm enjoying this story. Try to put breaks in every time people talk so you don't end up with a giant paragraph like the last one. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks for that I'll see into it, and maybe make some fixes to the already published story!
tracking
why must you leave me at a cliff hangar!?
I MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS.
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Cliffhangers are what keeps people coming back! That's why
Thanks for liking it though
If anyone is up for it, I would like someone to be my pre-reader, since the one I have now has very little time.
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I've gone over the first chapter again to make it more readable.
I've gotten better at formatting text, since I started and also read this nice guide: Ezn's Guide
I hope it's become better
382452>>382452 Spinter6 is a good proof-reader he is helping me, and I must say i am very pleased with his work.