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I used to have everything. A good job, a house, and a family. It was all taken away from me in an instant. I thought I could handle the grief alone, but I signed a contract that changed everything. When I was told I would get a second chance, being a pony was not what I had in mind.
In this story follow a man suffering from grief as he gets more than what he bargained for. Would you trade emotional for physical pain to run away?
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Interesting start will stay for more just to see where this goes.
Definitely an interesting start, will be fun to see where the story goes.
The God FIM Fiction of FIMFICTION.net approves.
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Waking up in a strange world, in a lab, with an alien who speaks your language?
WELP INTO THE CHOAS WE DIVE EYE FIRST!
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"Into insanity we go."
That's more like it.
Analysing... Wife and kids, taken or left? 🤔
Well at least we're not starting on the trope of "I got a sucky job and have no friends and family is nonexistent."
But we wonder what he's leaving behind? Perhaps it's not so important, that contract said he would no longer be emotionally attached to the old world...
Post-Ascension, pre-tirek. A good period.
Seems the transfer induced more heat than normal, wonder what was left in his place?
Keep going! ;)
HMMMMM...
WELP I LOVE THIS SO FAR!
Bravo, writer. Bravo.
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Thank you.
Awesome story!
One speaker, one paragraph. Don't lump more than one speaker's dialogue in a paragraph.
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Whoops, I didn't catch that when I transferred it. It was just that one instance right?
This is and interesting start, can't wait to see where you take it!
Since I found this in the "human turned filly/colt" section, I assume that he is going to turn into a foal later on. I hope it's a colt! There are too many human turned filly stories. Human turned colt is better in my opinion but you do you.
Go Beyond! PLUS ULTRA!
Twilight: "Don't touch horns, they're sensitive!"
Charlie: "Oh gosh, this bump here is really sensitive!"
Everyone: "Oh dear... 😱"
Perhaps it's a good thing they overdosed him a bit, this next part is going to hurt. Wonder who the pony DNA came from, is it a not-so-instantaneous result of the apparently-botched dimensional transport? The EQG one does it seemingly less... eh, harmful, so maybe this one was underpowered and so mishaps resulted?
Now Charlie, if a pastel unicorn asks you to go to Candy Mountain, RUN!
Keep going! ;)
You've met with a terrible fate, haven't you?
*flashbacks to scp 3001*
Oddly, this brings to mind part of an episode of the Three Stooges cartoon series.
Love it so far! Added to my read list.
WAZUP LUNA!
Personally? It took four people to hold me down long enough to give me a shot when I was a kid.
I like this. Please, continue.
Also... Luna, just... Luna
Fast action on the knockout, combined with the painkillers from before... Fever dream here we come! Time to meet Best Princess!
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Thank you for the positive feedback. What if I told you this was my first fanfic?
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I would be glad that you had the courage to write. It's hella cool, like this fic. Good job on it thus far.
interesting. cant wait to see more
Couldn’t help but think of this when I read ”Charlie” in that paragraph.
I don’t do pms. I write as I read.
Expect visit from Fluttershy.
Yeah I figured he was growing a unicorn horn.
Reminds me of
formally
Aww, so you aren't going to make him a grey on grey unicorn whose sole purpose is to be harrased by a blue and a pink pony all the time?
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I want to try liver disaster.
Ooooooooooooooo. I await the next chapter. Well written!
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What?
Yes, not only is the dimensional alignment syncing such that return is impossible, now we need to avoid talking about home because of who's not in it...
Keep going! ;)
I wonder what good ole Dissy has to say about the lad.
Ahem maybe not in Equestria but in the Crystal Empire there is.
Yeah that happened way back in Greek mythology about 3,000+ years ago.
Llyyyyrrrraaaaaa! What did you DO?!!!??!
Silly BonBon, why are you remembering twice why you love Lyra's obsessiveness?
Good idea to ping Discord for help, but let's hope Twilight doesn't fly off the handle with accusations.
Keep going, ;)
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Thanks for pointing out that redundancy!
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😘
Super Naturals, Twilight. Read it.
Solution in four words.
Maybe the humans got banished the same time the alicorns disappeared.