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In life, a variety of incidents happen, for example - getting into Equestria? Finding himself in an incomprehensible place, the hero wants to return to his world, but things are complicated by the fact that he has the body of... a Filly? By trying to return home, what challenges will the hero meet? What lessons will he learn? And in the end, does he want to come back? After all, maybe a new life in Equestria is maybe not so bad after all?
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Interesting start, so it would seem he has taken someone's place here. I wonder if they will assume that she is a changeling right away.
By the way you are forgetting to cap your speech lines. It is very important to readers to have indications of speech, please work on your quotations ("...") with future chapters or it becomes a real chore to try and read and figure out if someone is actually talking.
Beyond that though, interesting set up and I would read more.
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I'll try to edit a chapter, I heard you
10831971
Good deal, look forward to the next one.
10838048
I will fix it as soon as possible
Thanks,
I think you got sauna and bathhouse mixed up.
Hello, excuse me, but I have a question for you.
By any chance there shouldn't be a title for chapter 2 called "New day, new surprise"?
Because, as far as I suppose, it has been eliminated.
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all right
Yes, that was the title of Chapter 2, but after a few hours it was almost completely rewritten. And I thought that the old title did not quite fit
Me gustó mucho el nuevo episodio
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nice can't wait to see more
Good start so far, but the prose is sloppy in places, and you slip between present and past tense on more than a few occasions. Keep at it!
10842012
Thanks!
I will try to do it better. English my third if not fourth language
But I am trying to improve this!
Just made me think of that comic of Celestia fast asleep on a telescope. Then Luna slaps her awake and she says, “ The beer is under the elephant I swear.”
Me gustó el nuevo episodio
Me gusta el sentimiento de familia que transmite al leer la lectura 😁😁😁🤧
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Gracias!
10850022
I fixed it, thanks for help
Wait I thought they were upstairs in Twinkleshine’s room?
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You're right, how could I miss this
Anyway, thanks a lot, I fixed everything
Was the aura-induced-hypnosis inspired by Star Sparkle?
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I think I can say yes.
Courtesy of Star Sparkle, of course.
In my opinion, this is a cool idea.
If everything works out as planned, it will end up with a slightly unusual project. I won't say anything more, spoilers.
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I hope you 2 can do a collab, it'd be an interesting story! Good Luck in writing Ma'am!
Love your story signed up just for this looking forward to more chapters
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thank you very much
Great chapter
You really need to pick a tense, past or present, and stick to it.
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I will try to
Beautiful ch thank you
Wait they both are Twinkleshine? The sister and the younger sister?
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thank you for your help
Sooner or later I will be able to make a chapter without mistakes.
Dude doesn’t know how to read an analog clock… how disappointing. I’m 16 and Ik how to do it.
Wow, she got over her hypnosis much quicker than Star (Sparkle) did.
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hehe, people are different
10947206
you are both right and wrong, I think if you read further, you will understand. If not, then I am ready to give you an answer why you are partially wrong (in this case, I will write in private messages)
Can't wait for the next chapter
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I will try
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Great also I really loves these types of stories it's in my top 10 favorite stories
Seemed what?
Thank you thank you for a awesome ch the wait was worth it
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thanks for help
When I saw the title of this chapter I couldn’t help but think of this.
Good job, I have been enjoying the story thus far.
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Hehe, I got that too when I decided on a title.
UH-OH someone is caught in a lie another great ch
Me gustó el episodio me pregunto como se las ingeniara para que no pienses que es un cambiante
Didn't like it, that I put it on the Maybe Dead bookshelf yesterday? ;-)
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Yes! this is the main reason for the update! (Joke! or not?