After tears start forming between the human and pony dimension, a guy named Morning Wonder falls through and finds himself changed into a pony, a mare no less!
Now he has to learn how to cope with his new body, how to get around in a new world without any money to his name and figure out how to get home, if he wants to go home that is...
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ππππ₯¦ Here ya go. A nice and healthy meal that rats usually like a lot.
There's not much to say because there's only one chapter so far, but I'm interested. I'm mostly curious if Morning Wonder will encounter any ponies that remind him of humans he knows.
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Who knows? Only time will tell... Who am I kidding! Of course there will be some interaction with the main 6. I tagged them for a reason. To what extent though, I'll keep to myself for now.
Self insert huh? Good. I always love these comfy brony in equestria stories!! Needs to be more of them
Interesting, and a good read
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You'd think it is a self-insert, but when I created this OC, it was actually referring to the Equestria version of MorningWonder. This human version was only thought of with this story. And while similar, there's also a difference between their cutie marks.
During the time of this story, the Equestria version is traveling all across Equestria, so we probably won't see him in this story anytime soon. Who knows, I might one day tell the story of the Equestria version too.
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Thanks!
Why not go pew pew on campus? The police certainly won't stop you
Is that a slang for morning masturbation?
Great prolouge btw.
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I must point out that the foal in your picture has a rectangular face.Only stallions look like this. A mare's face is round.
For example, my head portrait is a mare.
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Yup, you are right. That's because the stallion in the picture is actually Equestria's version of Morning Wonder. I didn't have any art for the human-turned-mare, unfortunately.
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Are you still writing books on other platforms?
This is off to an interesting and good start.
Okay; Short story time.
When I was back in grade 7, I knew a kid named Malcolm. He was overweight and neeeded glasses, if i remember correctly. He was an immediate punching bag. And due to the fact that at the time you HAD to be outside for recess, (despite the weather, apparently) he got beat up nearly every day, when the teachers weren't loking out.
Eventually he was going to get transfered to a different school, to spare his life. Later on that day, I heard one of his regular bullies say, verbatim, "Alright guys. This is Malcolm's last day here. Let'smake sure that it's his worst."
He managed to get the (________) out of there, so he avoided any further beatings. However, I was the next... "biggest" obvious target. I learned to make myself VERY stealthy (as kids of that age go) and to know the punch lines to all of the jokes that don't have a proper y/n answer.
Example:
Either way, people who wated to make fun of me lost interest after finding thjat i knew the joke they were going to make. That in of itself was pretty funny, though.
I'm getting off track. The point is that the MC here has my sympathy.
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