• Member Since 27th Feb, 2012
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Garrett Hafner, a 20 year old man, has just woken up in a strange land. After snooping around, and eavesdropping, for a bit he hypothesized that he was in a land called Equestria. The land was filled with ponys as the main species, and that they had the intelligence to set up complex societies and they had the ability to engineer and speak. After meeting with what seemed to be the scholar of the town, he joins her on his quest to find a way home, he hopes.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 15 )

"Cool water."

So the character went through a stargate? ;);)Sweet. I'm looking forward to reading more of this, and will be tracking!

This is very well written and I like the protagonist already. I don't think I've ever read a story about a medical professional in Equestria.You have my attention; I'm tracking and hoping for an update soon!

Very cool.
tracked! :twilightsmile:

Hey guys, Thanks for taking a liking to my story. This is my first original piece of fanfiction and would like to thank you for reading it. I am currently writing chapter two and it may be out, scratch that, will be out tonight. So I hope your ready. :twilightsheepish:

I don't mean to be nitpicky but can the person who disliked this at least comment why they didnt like it. I just wanna know if its grammatical so I can know for future chapters. and If its a dislike just cause you didn't find it an appealing story what could I improve in my future works to fix the issue.:twilightsmile:

cool story bro /)
:yay:

Nice story :pinkiehappy: gonna track this one:twilightsmile: just one question... did you rhyme Zecoras name or not? maybe just me being stupid cuz i can't see it:rainbowhuh:

275523 no, the only thing I could think of that rhymes with zecora is flora. now that I think about it I can edit it and add a sentence to make it rhyme. but no, I didn't try to make it rhyme.

I had to pull my brain out of weekend mode to read this. (It's always in weekend mode unless a topic of worthy debate comes up in school.) Anyways, this is really good. Originaly is also great.

277058 yeah this is how my brain thinks all the time, it's just I have to dumb it down for people at my school. I felt people in this community would be able to decipher my higher than average vocabulary so I just went with it.

Sorry for no updates yet. :twilightblush: I was gonna try to make at least a chapter every 1-3 days, but I wasn't in school on Friday and I had lots to do over the weekend so I didn't get a whole lot written. I am a good way into chapter three and This one will be longer than average. I'm hoping to getting to 2,000 words to compensate for my slow releases, but I should be done with chapter three by tomorrow. If not by tomorrow then definitely Tuesday. Thanks a bunch for your patience. :twilightsmile:

289795 Big Update!!!
Been having many things happen in my life recently, and am still suck in the middle of chapter 3. My dads car broke down, someone has passed away who I know, and I have a UIL activity I've had to stay after school every Tuesday and Thursday until 8:00 p.m. Please be patient, I am so sorry I didn't get chapter three out when I promised, I feel horrible for it. :fluttercry: Thanks for the tracks, comments, and watch(s). I'll try and make it up to y'all somehow. :twilightsheepish:

I'm so sorry it's been 2 months since my last update....and I have more bad news. As of now, the story is completely on hold. Recently my mom has been diagnosed with lymphoma cancer and leukemia.... So yeah. And my mom also said that if she lives through this she is divorcing my dad. So IDK when I can work on this again, and I'm so sorry that I don't have an update or anything like that...If I could concentrate I would write it, but I have so many things going through my life/head right now I can barely keep track of school. I'm sorry, I'll restart making chapters again ASAP.

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