NOTE: Completed story!
When you really feel down in the dumps and you are on the brink of a breakdown or maybe already have a breakdown, your true friends will come to your aid and show you the true meaning of the Magic of Friendship.
The story is based loosely on own experiences, with some twists from Rainbow Dash fan fiction (mainly being that she’s a she, and I’m a he).
Some small aspects of Rainbow Dash’ life are changed to fit the story better (don’t be mad please), but still I think, that Rainbow is the best of the mane 6 to fit in as main protagonist, since her character also plays a part in the meaning of the story.
I had to get this out, so I hope you really enjoy.
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Credits for the image to FLARE3 -> http://imjustdoctorwhooves.deviantart.com/favourites/#/d4nxez7
This is lovely please take whats left of my internets and this shiny coin
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Thanks a lot!
Any particular constructive comments or just "It's good"?
I'm still adjusting my writing style, so any helpful comments would be nice.
(That doesn't mean I don't like getting these sorts of comments too xD Always loves comments
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The story wasn't long enough to make me cry, but it touched my heart. A few spelling and grammar errors here and there, but a nice story nonetheless
Writing style is good I don't see any area for improvement.
Content wise although I have no experiance with it, it does feel like two friends shareing their problems with each other over a drink.
Overall a nice little TwiDash story
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Thanks. Also sorry for the spelling mistakes. Did read it through, but hadn't a pre-reader on this one.
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(I'm on the lookout for one at the moment
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Thanks for the comment. And thanks for liking my writing style. I have been improving lately ( at least I think ), and still hope to get better, so practice is the way to go right?
A few spelling errors here and there. Although i assume it's because you didn't have a pre-reader to sort those out.
It kinda felt like a different or personal story was forced into this.
However it flowed well enough and it was touching and to the point.
goodluck for the future
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Thanks