deactived, thanks for hanging around.
Golden Harvest, 'Carrot Top' as someponies may refer her as, is living in Ponyville as a gardener. She get's payed a healthy amount, has friends who care about her and appears ultimately happy...If she is, then why does she cry herself to sleep every night? Why does she lock herself in her own mind and avoid everypony? How could she be sad? She just wants to be loved, but mostly, for the pain to go away....
Art done by ~Me
Inspired by the song 'Golden' by Fall Out Boy
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Nice story! :
Wow! That's an excellent story.
But you kept writing 'Cherilee' instead of 'Cheerily'.
149412 I wrote her name as Cherilee because that's how it's spelled on the character tags. Plus, it can be abbreviate as 'Lee'
Aww! I wanna go give her a nice big hug now!
Last chapter: "Twilight's nice, but she's with Fluttershy"
She's... she's cheating on her!?!? DRAMA BOMB! Must...track...
Very nice story, I like the amount of emotion put into it.
Though, I disagree with the all-encompassing italics--I find them quite distracting.
*tracks anyway*
If you want a more in-depth review, send me a message.
aaaaaaand boom goes the dynamite
Very nice story here so far, but there is one thing you seem to forget about writing:
When a new character speaks, start a new paragraph.
Other than that, keep up the good work!
Really nice but very predictable. Before the second chapter, not even reading any tags that may or may not exist, the pairing was very predictable between Twi and Golden. Also, why must Fluttershy be cheated on?
And where is Rainbowdash?!?! 
Fluttersparkle and ApplexRare and solo Pinkie but no Dash...? Meh, I can shake that off. 
i like it, but i am worried about the twilight with fluttershy... i guess this does have a sad tag after all...
I notice some ponies freaking over the GoldenSparkle issue, It all be clear soon.
-TLC
I don't really like how this came out.
Tell what you think...
-TLC
I love this, it's.....well, I'd go into details but there are some things that people can't share.
We are our own worst critics, but please know TLC that what you have here is painfully beautiful. If anything, it's exactly what I needed to read, and I hope there is more.
Poor Cheerilee. MOAR!
Your user name is too modest...
I approve!
cant think of what to say other than this : damn bitches is crazy!
soon your going to have drama between Cheerilee and Twilight and Fluttershy, and then carrot top (yes, that is her name, or at least nick name) is going to be worse off....
(ps I love the story!)
Next chapter will be up tomorrow. (1/24)
Ask questions and find errors(if you wanna) . I read every comment with a smile.
Neighgermeister, saw that, from coffee's story
. Good story as Said before and please post more.
This story has potential, though I have a few things to say about it.
I don't know if you'd want a full blown review in the comments box or not though. Would you rather I send you a private message?
155756 Nah, just go ahead and upload it here. I don't mind.
I really like the story! a few capitalization errors, but nothing serious! pls keep writing!
What is Fluttershy going to do!?
Prediction: Cherrilee will think that Golden suicided herself, and so Cheerilee makes herself die to death so she doesn't have to feel the pain, and then Golden discovers that Cheerilee dieded to death until she was killed and it makes Golden's heart burst into a thousand shards of agony.
Yay?
156654 Scary, right? You have no idea....
This chapter is going to start off the main conflict of the story. I hope it's a good start, if not....meh.
btw, if you want to review this story at all, just leave it in the comments. I read all of them.
this world its so .... depressing, yet hopeful and energetic, a rush of emotions. something that can only be expressed through words and could never be taken from the real world, and you, expressed it perfectly.
Aw, dammit! Just when it was getting good.
Nicely written, It keeps reminding me of times when I get depressed which sometimes come from a lack of communication, Other times they're from laziness. I keep thinking of Morphine songs while reading your story, This chapter in particular reminds me of "You Look Like Rain". http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WkSzV6jAkhQ
Yeah, the ending to the chapter was a bit harsh. It was how it was supposed to go. Golden's life is about to take a step back and take a couple of turns.
Ah yes, a fellow member of the Undead Army.
Ugh! Alright, Chapter 7.
meh
Leave a comment,
ALSO: If you want, leave a review of the story so far. Usually, after the sixth chapter, I get a little nervous about how the story's doing.
-TLC
Where's my popcorn?! This is really good!
As Scootz said
BOOM GOES THE DYNAMITE!
To anypony who was just confused why a chapter appeared and dissapeared, it's because I had accidentally published it before it was even finished.
I don't know why, but Guile's Theme fits SO well with this story.
Well I guess Guile's Theme really DOES go with everything.
I'm liking how the story is progressing. Thanks for writing and uploading it!
wow, a little language, but I mean for some one in Golden's position, I would just as much. The plot and characterization is really good!
168553 Yeah
Sorry about that! I was trying to imagine a good, drunk over reaction. And the first thing that popped into my head was 'Swearing!'
Oh shit boy, stuff just got real!
-Edit-
Also, First. Thats is all.
So. Bucking. Sad. I hate Golden's father. I hope bad things happen to him.
"..."
YEAH! LOVE IS SO POWERFUL MAN! Oh gods now I'm sounding like a hippy!
would be funny if then she just woke up in her bed, but i think this needs a epilogue.
And that's the power of love. *cue music* http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-NMph943tsw
Sorry, It's appropriate. Anyway, I'm glad Golden is OK and I look forward to the next part!
So beautiful.
very good
I loved this story from the moment I read the first paragraph way back in chapter 1, I wasn't sure if I should read it or not because I break down easy.
Life like her, just got me and I somehow understand why and what she is going through. I shouldn't assume, but I think you went through similar things. Thank you for writing this, Im keeping this in favorites.
damn... that was amazing
"Spike is still Spike" Forever alone...
"Dedicated To The Autumns In Us All."
that was a very emotional story, thank you for writing!