She's just so amazing. Everything about her should be praised from her beautiful red mane to her lemonade like fur. I can't help but watch, due to my own fear of spontaneously combusting by her beauty. Even now I run a risk.
I only watch her from the outskirts of her view, her not leaving mine as I sit in the background.
(This story will be written in a new type of style I'm trying to produce involving poetic undertones and not-so long chapters. There will be future appearances from the cast and longer chapters in the future)
Chapters (6)
Awesome, simply awesome. Did a good job with the words as well, really made me feel Tops's emotion for Rose. Look forward to seeing more.
Ah, but the road to hell is paved with good intentions.
It seems like you have some small spelling errors:
should be 'spine'
And grammar:
day. Of
There are groups here that will help with that.
Upvoted.
1825431 Fixed! Thanks, man.
I don't remember seeing it very often, but it's very easy to empathize with the character.
Roseluck story? INSTANT READ.
It's... not bad? Kinda creepy, but not bad. Still got a way to go, but definitely worth reading more of.
Also, I approve of the cover picture.
This is quite interesting. I think most of us feel like Tops sometimes when it comes to our crushes.
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Love the start and I've got a hunch that his night at the bar is in for a loop. Thanks for another story TLC can't wait to see where you take us.
New chapter?
I like it. Definitely kept a poetic feel.
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And if its the CMC, it's nothing good.
I like how the whole thing has a moody air to it, yet you just somehow know something good is gonna happen eventually (right?).
This is under appreciated. Keep up the good work.
"I imagined every two were in their own little race, starting from the moment they hit the window and as they made their way down, merging with the others for more speed."
HOLY SHIT, ME TOO! notforeveralone.jpg
Have a fave and like!
Oh, and the story is awesome too. Keep it up!
MOAR NAO PLZZZZZZ!!!!!!
3036585 Oh my god, I thought I was the only one!
It made long drives in the rain soothing. 
Really awesome man, looking forward to reading more!
Thoroughly enjoyable.
At first it was off putting not knowing initially which was talking but it really grew on me and kept my interest.
While it could end here, I hope it doesn't.