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TLC


deactived, thanks for hanging around.

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Rarity's been awfully lonely lately and doesn't want to be alone on Hearts and Hooves day. So she and Fluttershy make a trip to the spa...
Inspired by Linkin Park's 'The Little Things Give You Away'
Originally part of Minutes To Millennium

Image Link: http://internationaltck.deviantart.com/art/Rarity-Fluttershy-Flare-Wallpaer-277465496

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TLC

Tell me if anything needs to be fixed or if somethings are out of place. I did finish this at 10:00 PM.
I think this could be better, but it's really about what you guys think.
Happy Hearts and Hooves day, Everypony!:heart:

~<3
-TLC

Wow, poor Spike. After all that devotion, to get turfed like that without a word. Ouch.

A pretty good story. My one problem with it is Fluttershy seems a little OOC in the end

The rabbit's name is Angel not Angle.:trollestia:

TLC

219802 Fixed, thank you.:twilightsmile:

I really like it! I've been searching for a good Flarity fic for ages and this one seems to be nice. Keep writing please! :)

"Twilight and the Doctor"
"Applejack and Rainbow Dash"

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Well other than that, this was pretty emotional and cute. Though I don't like Spike/Rarity, it always annoys me when I see all these Rarity shippings that don't even address Spike, and it's nice to see that this one did.

I love the picture! I want it for my laptop background!:heart:

:yay: I am quite pleased :heart::heart::heart:

Damn, Rarity. How could forget Spike like that?

Spike and rarity are just not meant to be but... Fluttershy and rarity yep :trixieshiftright:

This was well written, although most of the pairings seem kind of odd to me, including the main one.

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