Rarity's been awfully lonely lately and doesn't want to be alone on Hearts and Hooves day. So she and Fluttershy make a trip to the spa...
Inspired by Linkin Park's 'The Little Things Give You Away'
Originally part of Minutes To Millennium
Image Link: http://internationaltck.deviantart.com/art/Rarity-Fluttershy-Flare-Wallpaer-277465496
Tell me if anything needs to be fixed or if somethings are out of place. I did finish this at 10:00 PM.
I think this could be better, but it's really about what you guys think.
Happy Hearts and Hooves day, Everypony!
~<3
-TLC
Wow, poor Spike. After all that devotion, to get turfed like that without a word. Ouch.
A pretty good story. My one problem with it is Fluttershy seems a little OOC in the end
The rabbit's name is Angel not Angle.
219802 Fixed, thank you.
I really like it! I've been searching for a good Flarity fic for ages and this one seems to be nice. Keep writing please! :)
"Twilight and the Doctor"
"Applejack and Rainbow Dash"
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Well other than that, this was pretty emotional and cute. Though I don't like Spike/Rarity, it always annoys me when I see all these Rarity shippings that don't even address Spike, and it's nice to see that this one did.
I love the picture! I want it for my laptop background!
I am quite pleased
Damn, Rarity. How could forget Spike like that?
Spike and rarity are just not meant to be but... Fluttershy and rarity yep
This was well written, although most of the pairings seem kind of odd to me, including the main one.