yup i think every time you want to use though in this kind of context although is better
I mean, either works, but I think I agree.
i think the word you were seeking was knowing
Yup.
i'm pretty sure as is better than tough in here
No, gonna have to disagree with that. 'As' would imply I'm comparing the figure to something that is not as eaten up as it is, where as the sentence is about it being recognizable 'even though' she is half eaten.
I figured after the last chapter with Pumpkin Patch in Carousel Boutique that she was reliving the torment visited upon the mane 6 in the original story. There are some variations, yes, but things are definitely following along. Next would be Pinkie & Twilight, with Rainbow Dash being an outlier since she didn’t face the Candy Mare until the sequel.
There was something a little... off about the lower floor to which she had arrived. There were bird houses everywhere, hanging from the ceiling and the walls. Tiny baskets lined with pillows littered the floor and seemed to spread down halls and into rooms that were empty save for more animal care paraffinalia. Whatever pony that lived here either had a very eclectic sense of style or kept way more pets than most ponies could usually afford. The young mare herself had never owned a pet of her own. How could they afford to put food in another mouth when their family could barely feed themselves? The idea of a home filled with animals was both exciting and a little troubling. How wealthy, exactly, was the owner of this abode?
yup i think every time you want to use though in this kind of context although is better
i think the word you were seeking was knowing
one by one between comas as it is an apposition
i'm pretty sure as is better than tough in here
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I mean, either works, but I think I agree.
Yup.
No, gonna have to disagree with that. 'As' would imply I'm comparing the figure to something that is not as eaten up as it is, where as the sentence is about it being recognizable 'even though' she is half eaten.
Thanks though.
ooh is this a dawning?
I figured after the last chapter with Pumpkin Patch in Carousel Boutique that she was reliving the torment visited upon the mane 6 in the original story. There are some variations, yes, but things are definitely following along. Next would be Pinkie & Twilight, with Rainbow Dash being an outlier since she didn’t face the Candy Mare until the sequel.
Fluttershy's?!
Finally dawned on me. I got an inkling with barn in the first interlude, but now the 2nd one makes much more sense.