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Izumichan-995


A kitty that loves MLP. Ive begun to write my own Fanfics. Hope you like them.

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The Mane 6 are brought to Canterlot by Celestia. After much deliberations the Princess's of Equestria and the Princess of the Crystal Empire have a secret that they wish to be shared with the Mane 6. A sercret so big its been kept from them even after Twilight became the Princess of Friendship. Follow our faviorte ponies as they explore the unknown reaches of space in the most powerful ship ever known.

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This series follows the Space Battleship Yamato 2199 universe. Thus all character, events, specifications, and locations are from the 2199 universe and not the orignal universe.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 39 )

I want to read more because this is a great start

Seems like a new start up from an older Yamato story and you should be using the term mares not fillies, fillies are young horses and ponies like the crusaders.

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Ah. Thank you. Im currently writting chapter 2 so ill make the modifications. And yes you are correct, i was inspired by Gideon020's My Little Yamato. But.....if ypu read that fanfic you know what happened to it.

"Whats Wave-Motion energy?" Asked Applejack.

Good question Applejack

"Wave-Motion energy is basically a energy formed from Wave-motion." Everyone looks at Twilight. "Theoretically, wave-motion energy is created when a higher dimension is compacted to a smaller size. The energy that is released from the act of the higher dimension being compacted is Wave-Motion energy. In a way it is a combination of gravitational waves and tachyons. But this is all theories that havent been proven yet. Are you saying the creators have proven these theories?"

Of course she's knows

"That was a lot of egghead stuff Twilight." Said Rainbow Dash still confused.

I agree with you

Twilight sighs. "Ok. Think of Wave-Motion energy to be a kind of super energy generated by a worm hole in a way."

I know where you getting at

"Oooooooooohhh.......whats a worm hole?" Rainbow Dash said still highly confused.

To answer your question: a wormhole is black void that sucks up anything, nobody knows what's on the otherside, it might be your death, but it pulls planets, like it has a gravitational force pulls you towards it:twilightblush:

That was a lot of research for them, but at the end they found out they live on the planet humans used to live on

I have a question is Celestia controls the sun Luna controls the moon who controls the rest of the planets in the solar system if this is Earth after humans

And if im reading this correctly, this is like a super warship." Twilight said.

The ponies look at each other in confusion. "What do you mean?" Rainbow Dash asked.

"It means that this ship was made to combat even the worst threats even if it has to do it by itself." Twilight said.

just wait until they find out the OTHER thing Wave Motion Energy is used for...

Rarity would not say pumpkin but darling.

Twilight has her castle so E.G. is a thing. How do they not connect the dots?

I question the princesses being crew. They rule a nation. At best could see Luna as captain with Twilight first mate.

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No kidding and if they leave into space who is going to control the Sun and Moon around Equestria, also with Luna gone then ponies will have no one to protect them in their dreams again, also I remember a story like this awhile back and it was taken down when it go a lot of down votes.

We will test everything out there. Warp drive, shock cannons, the Asteroid Ring Generated Offence (ARGO) system and the Wave-Motion Cannon." Celestia stated.

The ULTIMATE in Iscandari Area Denial Technology: Completely atomize the area you target and deny that it exists!

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Well Luna only recently returned to that role so her being gone again wpn't do too much.

Just hope the next chapter doesn't include spy and stuff like that.

Again who is running the country as well as the crew would not be ready to actually fly the ship yet. They just learned of her and just got her powered up.

Author this is a good concept but you need to rewrite and slow down the pace a bit.

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I appreciate the comments. But please keep the criticism to a low. If your not enjoying my story you dont have to read it. Your over thinking everything.

I am loving this. I love giant spaceship/ Giant advanced warship stuff.

Any idea where I can watch a subed version of this anime at?

oh god. Found it and your story is great but you can't capture the Majesty of that ship. Then again I doubt many people could. yours is a very close second.

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No I am not, nor am I the only one voicing this

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But your the only one who is constantly voicing you negative opinion. If you dont like the story, dont read it and dont comment on it. Just leave please.

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I want your story to be they best it can be. That's why i say what I say.

What chance do they actually have? Earth had a fleet of Yamato level ships and up and still lost?

are you going to mention the fact that yamato was already a 1000 + year old battleship before it was a starship?

"I. I dont know. Engine isn't responding." Luna said as she presses and pulls on the steering controls and the acceleration lever.

yea........ the Engine(s) couldn’t handle the pressure in the Anime that the Warp-jump cursed either and got temporarily knocked out of action, that and with no Engine power it completely shut down everything, (duh, :P)

expect you know..... in the Anime it crashed on Jupiter, not Saturn, but still,

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Yeah. I know. This was my first story. My 2nd SBY story is a lot better with many improvements.

yo is this story dead or what???

aaawwww....i JUST found this story..and it looks like the story itself might be dead??

also

THAT WAS AWESOME...cause i DO NOT remember the main wave cannon being THAT powerful.

Come on man don't let this story be dead it's getting really really interesting to read 🤯🤯🤯

"Oh. Think nothing of it pumpkin. In fact, i needed the time off. Having to design 10 new brands of clothes is really quite tiring." Said Rarity speaking up first.

Rarity has never once called anyone “pumkin”

Please fix your mistakes. I get the intent of what you are doing, but it’s hard for me to look at this when multiple words are written incorrectly and the way the ponies talk just feels….. off, as if you only saw a couple episodes of the show and didn’t bother to get the character personalities right.

Nice. Full of mistakes, but nice.

Comment posted by Rob_Rhapsody deleted Sep 15th, 2022

"No. Just listen. At the time, Yamato was replaced by another kind of starship called the Andromeda. It was supposed to be more powerful than Yamato. However the crew of the Yamato experienced a call from a far away planet to recieve a new power. While originally not allowed to go, the crew stole the Yamato and took the journey by themselves. This was smart as the Gatlantis Empire invades again and begins to destroy the Human-Garmillas fleets. But just as they reach Earth Yamato returns with the new power and destroys the Gatlantis Empire."

🚨SPOILER ALERT!!!🚨

"Ah understand Princess. Ah'll make sure to keep the engine in tip-top shape." Applejack said proudly as she took her manual under her hoof.

They’re screwed.

Which one is going to be Derrick Wildstar, and Which, will be Nova ????

Wait til they find out the Yamatos' other capabilities...like Space Warping...or the Wave-Motion Gun.

SO....Celestia is Captain Avatar...Luna is Derrick Wildstar...Fluttershy is Nova ??

ARGO....was the original name, given to the Yamato.

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