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Haliton
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Well done human. I noticed a few errors in your spelling, but over all it was a nice story. The prince of all saiyans approves of this literature.
I LOVE IT
It is 4:08 A.M. where I am: dark and gloomy. Thanks to this, I don't feel too sad.
Very well done.
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Thanks! Anything you liked or disliked want to comment further on or point out?
This is really good, i hope you do more
You are best human
"Who's a good little human?". Me: HOLY SHIT
This is amazing!
OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!
Well done man, don't stop writing.
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Belly rubs
FUCK YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Are rare nice clopfics like yours .
You are very good
I could fap to this
There are too many fics that have ponies overreact at humans being omnivores. Understandable for the average pony, but for someone like Fluttershy who helps literally every animal to be most mortified doesn't make sense.
I mean look here:
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I like this here how perfectly comfortable she is with the human's true self. Even acknowledging our primitive instincts that we aren't aware of, such as him eying fish in the river.
What would have been a plus in this is having some undertones of predator and prey dynamic that is going on here. Though tamed we are as civilized humans, the fact still remains and would emerge in sex.
Like in "Xenophilia" Rainbow Dash was having the thrill of feeling the sharp, predatory front human teeth when driving her tongue in for kisses. Would have been an excellent if Fluttershy was having the same thrills having intimate with this gentle but still meat eating man after just chowing down his salmon.
Though having this preceded by such an adorable tickling scene, it's really nice to return to the gentleness and cuddling again.
Still a very sweet, loving fic.
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That's what I was going for, yes. The idea I had is that since you're of a different species Fluttershy can see you like another one of her animals. As a result she can think of and understand your behaviour in ways she is more comfortable with. Also, belly rubs since you can play her pet. This was also why I had her referring to your urges as a need she should know it's only natural. Also why I had her take it from behind as opposed to Rarity.
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Because you're her little human who's been so good.
1048672I wish she would give me epic belly rubs
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I don't really think of my clopfics as 'clop' very much anymore, just shameless feely romantic fics with the cloppy bits solely to add to the sappiness of it all.
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Oh man I was tired as hell when I wrote that last reply
Anyway, I just liked playing around with the idea of Fluttershy seeing you as another one of her animal friends. And she'd definitely be understanding of carnivores/omnivores all things considered, but here it's just another way to show affection, by catering to a need she knows you have even if you don't want to tell her.
A really nice short fic, great work.
Well... it looks like i can finally jump off that cliff i kept telling my friend.
It was nice knowing everybrony.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lxteisYEJt1qcw3w0.jpg
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I don't read a TON of fanfics, and I haven't seen this take on Fluttershy before. I really like what you've done here with her attitude about humans as just another creature. Very interesting stuff, like her noticing the canine teeth and all that. I saw your comment where you mentioned that's why she'd be taken from behind, and I made that connection myself while reading the story. A nice unique take on lovey dovey sexing with yellow horse, and it actually makes sense.
I can't wait to see your approach for the other three. I hope they'll be as unique as this one.
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Thanks! This idea I had is actually why I did yellow horse now instead of after I did the ponies I liked better, since I suddenly came up with it and really wanted to see it done. I don't read a lot of Flutterfics either but I hope it's as unique as I think it is
spelling mistake at map in the fourth paragraph from the end it should be mat I believe
Other than that awesome liked this fluttershy better than most as they make her too meek and useless
5975352 It's kinda ironic to tell someone about a grammatical mistake when your own grammar is... well...
6052770 I told him about a spelling mistake not a grammer. I try to be respectful when I point out a mistake as I know I make many of them too.
I love it
this is so amazing