• Member Since 15th Jan, 2012
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Haliton


Just a place to host my pony-related ramblings.

Comments ( 19 )

Thanks! Any criticism would be good.

loved it, good detail, good build up, not to short and to long either so all in all its very good :D

I would rather a time with twilight update, but this works too.
Great story:twilightsmile:

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There is a few of thou's in my study's young student! still much to learn :trollestia:

And What a excentric story ive readed thank you!

780840 .....wut

That was nice. Very romantic. The waifufic will never die.
I know you're always looking for criticism, but there's really not much wrong here. I noticed a couple of typos, but everything seemed clear and it was a pleasure to read.

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Ah, thank you!
And pen down a Pinkie one sometime.

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I will, and thanks for the watch!
I was working on a light Derpy thing, but my computer is out of commission and I didn't have it saved anywhere else.
I think I'll work on the Pinkie thing in the meantime.

Please to read! Very nice :raritystarry:

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As do I!
Also did you get isperation from the fic Preggity? Or is that a spinoff of this?

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It wasn't really inspired by Preggity, though I'm sure it somehow influenced this.

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Having the character refer to Rarity as a 'woman' is intentional, I like to convey thoughts about the main pony in question like this. It's meant to show how you think about Rarity. She's a pony and you're a human, though.

Good read. Not the ussual smut readily available to me but a sensual and touching piece. My heart melted because of it. :heart:

soooooooooo amazing :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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