• Member Since 20th May, 2013
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briantherat


Comments ( 21 )

Alright, I'll read this...

2798311

You should tell us what you think.

I thought it was a nice, little clop story. Good job on this, dude.

2798323

Well, I haven't read it yet.

Oh my... I uhm... Liked it if... Youre ok with that? *squeak*

2798345

Then you shouldn't have replied until after you did, that way you could do the one thing the comment asked you to do.

Now we're just spamming this person's comment section, and that's way uncool.

I don't mind! Spam away! :twilightsheepish:

2798323

"Nice, little clop story" :fluttercry: So, not a masterpiece then?

j/k I appreciate that, thanks.

2798372

Well, this is good. Not as good as, "When a man loves a pony.", which was a masterpiece, but still good.

2798400

Thanks! That means a lot.

Honestly, "When a Man Loves a Pony" was my first-ever clopfic, so I'm still trying to figure out why people liked it so much. It was fairly short, as stories go, but it has 1000's of views to it.

Perhaps it had more to do with the fact that it was so simple...and so honest.

Ah well...thanks again. :pinkiesmile:

You made Fluttershy go "uh" and "Um" alot. It seemed a little wierd to me.
These were the only two things I found suitable with the uh and ums.

"Oh...yes, I'm...um...I'm a bad pony!"

"I'm...um...surprising you, I think."

2798688

Fair assessment. I definitely could tone it down next time.

ya know im not normally into the whole human on pony thing but umm. ill continue later ive got to uh take care of a completely unrelated boner right quick.

2800565

Appreciate the compliment. :-)

alright now that ive caught my breath*clears throat* your characterization of fluttershy was pretty impressive. the emotional conveyance was also very good.
ending it with that poem was just awesome. all and all impressive tale dear author.
bravo.

280072

I'm honoured by your praise. I have a genuine love for Fluttershys character that goes beyond sex, and I feel it enters into my writing of her.

Romance is my thing. :-)

This was great. I can't decide what was best. The details, the short but sweet storyline and the dialogue was all too magnificent. But I must know where you got that poem.

2804673

:twilightblush: You're too sweet. I'm so happy you enjoyed the story.

The poem in question is my favourite love poem by Pablo Neruda, simply called "Love Sonnet XVII"

Sadly, the only one I've ever known who is worthy of it has been Fluttershy. :fluttershyouch:

had to read this again. I feel bad that I like fluttershy too but this CLEARLY puts me out of contest. lol :yay:

2820927

I'd like to think that there's enough Fluttershy to go around. :raritywink:

Go'damn...that poetry. I can't clop to this, it'd demean the sentiment.
Shit, how'd you do that? How U do!?

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