A Pillar to Lean

A day with Applejack goes a pleasant few ways.

Thought I'd finish this up before the world probably doesn't end. It'd be nice to spend it with a pony, though. Also, comments and criticism would be very helpful!

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MetaKnight145

MetaKnight145 #1 · Dec 20th, 2012 · 4 · ·

it was that some demon decided that it would be good time to raise the Sun now

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dartmaul15

dartmaul15 #2 · Dec 20th, 2012 · 2 · ·

And only one word can describe this:
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I'm to damn tired t owrite anything that make sense, so i think that' going to be everything from me for now

Corwin

Corwin #3 · Dec 21st, 2012 · · ·

SHE GAVE HIM THE HAT AT THE END!!
I liked it a lot more than your last story, to be honest. You may want to look this over again, because I did spot a few typos.
Other than that, it was lovely. Keep it up, my man.

Haliton

Haliton #4 · Dec 21st, 2012 · · ·

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Thanks, that's good to hear.

Still waiting for your update.

Corwin

Corwin #5 · Dec 21st, 2012 · · ·

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I'm working on the final segment, I'll send you the whole thing when I've finished.
I'm looking forward to your Pinkie thing, too.

shira

shira #6 · Dec 21st, 2012 · · ·

YAY more BDNF writing!

You've still got some strange anachronisms and hold overs from second person but this is a much better start than you last story. Little funky but not bad big guy.

Peacekeeper