Sweetie's Punishment (The Sequel) [Commission]

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Neku22

Neku22 #1 · Sep 3rd, 2018 · · ·

It was very good to read I thought it was very interesting

Indigo Tornado

Indigo Tornado #2 · Sep 3rd, 2018 · · ·

i would commision for a sequel but i don't have money, so someone else commision a sequel!!!!

inconspicuous_brony

inconspicuous_brony #3 · Sep 3rd, 2018 · · ·

Great sequel, but I wonder how long they'll be able to get away with this before Rarity realizes they're trying to stay punished?

Midnight Shadows

Midnight Shadows #4 · Sep 3rd, 2018 · · ·

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Thanks~

9149289
Haha, this was already a sequel :p

9149482
Who knows~

Indigo Tornado

Indigo Tornado #5 · Sep 3rd, 2018 · 1 · ·

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A TRILOGY THEN!!!!!!!!! And a good story as always

doomie-22

doomie-22 #6 · Oct 31st, 2018 · · ·

9150204 Agreed! A sequel would be nice! Maybe Apple Bloom gets involved next.

pixel_pony

pixel_pony #7 · Dec 4th, 2018 · · ·

Shouldn’t this be tagged foalcon?

Midnight Shadows

Midnight Shadows #8 · Dec 5th, 2018 · · ·

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THERE'S A TAG FOR THAT NOW!?

That tag didn't exist at the time I made this.

Edit*: I do not see such a tag that I can tag it as in the options. If you're referring to my trigger warnings that are in a spoiler, I would think it would be very easy to put together that this is kind of foalcon. . . "Filly's first orgasm" is a bit of a giveaway on that. Didn't know I had to spell it out for people. That and they aren't directly foals in this, they are a little bit older.

pixel_pony

pixel_pony #9 · Dec 5th, 2018 · · ·

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Ok, just thought it should be listed

IZ_LINKS

IZ_LINKS #10 · Dec 19th, 2018 · · ·

I found this and I don’t know what to think..

I probably should’ve read the rules before jumping in, but now I’m debating on whether or not this thing is legal or not.

Eh I’m on vacation, who gives a fuck, am I right?

Midnight Shadows

Midnight Shadows #11 · Dec 19th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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That's okay, I've been told a lot of people don't know what to think. ~~All that matters is that I got paid~~ I mean, uh, that some people enjoy it! Yeah, that sounds much better and more wholesome.

IZ_LINKS