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Remember. We're the good guys | The Death Writer | Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/lewdchapter

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Big Mac being spied on at the urinal by pretty girls was not something I was expecting (not that I’m complaining, tho :ajsmug:) but him not even minding that (much) is totally some life goals. :rainbowdetermined2:

Scoots and Sweetie's National Anthem at the moment :rainbowlaugh:

Good stuff still :twilightsmile:

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I was talking to my best friend DrySpell when writing this and said something to the effect of "I'll eat my pants if anyone in the comments knows what the fuck the title is a reference to"

Congrats on forcing me to consume denim.

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:rainbowlaugh: My brain went straight to that as soon as I saw the title

I feel accomplished

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Yo that's not a good site, -.-

So, Applebloom gonna do it with both Rarity and Rainbow to establish dominance then?

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Stop linking to sketchy shit in my story

amazing work bud!

Sorry and sweet! I loved it!

Comment posted by SandyStorm deleted Apr 20th, 2022

Nice one~! I love stories that involve shameless thots getting the D. I have to say, though, it's interesting how only two of the three crusaders ended up as such in this AU. I'm used to it being all three of them in this kind of scenario. I'm guessing you wanted to step away from the incest trope this time around.

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That, and I wanted AB to act as the "straight man" at the start, to make sure some jokes landed

Pretty good story — right to the point and no unnecessary BS. Kind of disappointed that Sweetie Belle didn’t get a chance to outdo Scoots’ BJ skills, though.

. … . ..

Yeah … we’re definitely going to need a sequel now, where AB gets her revenge.

I’m liking the idea of AB getting a potion to either get gender-swapped or futa, then going on to absolutely demolish both Rainbow Dash and Rarity …. Possibly both at the same time.

And then she goes to Sweetie & Scoots and says, “There! Now you know how it feels. Pretty bad, huh?”

But the other two Crusaders just say “Me next!”

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My initial idea was to have Rarity and Rainbow basically run the same scheme except with AJ's mom (who's alive in this continuity cause reasons), but I stepped away from that cause it felt too samey. I like your angle, though, and if I ever revisit this story, it'd probably be something closer to that

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