When the Cutie Mark Crusaders have a slumber party at Sweetie Belle's house, their antics and trouble making causes secrets to be found out. How will the other Crusaders react to each other's secrets? Only time will tell.
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Oh my God! A new story from you!
Awesome.
A new story from you? Well I couldn't resist now could I?
All in all a very enjoyable and sweet read. I did notice a fw light spelling mistakes here and there but otherwise this is some pretty solid writing.
The part with Sweetie Belle was probably the best, really hit me in the feels.
Loved it! Does this take place in the same continuity as your 'Academy Disaster' fic?
3351736 Nope, in that story Dash was incontinent. In this story it is Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo that have the issues
i dont know y but i found this funny
I enjoyed the story.
Good work.
Hmmm, yes... This was adorable. Absolutely adorable. Amazing job.
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Thank you
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Well the point was suppose to be to have some funny moments in there as well as a small amount of emotional feels and then end it with a joke. So thank you!
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(That and with less time from irl stuff I only have time to do one story at a go, so making money vs. other, I'mma go with making money lol)
Nah, Academy Disaster is a different timeline :P Though I do hope to do more for both stories sometime in the future when I am less busy with irl stuff, I've mainly limited my writing to just commission stuff atm because frankly I need money, lol. I mean I guess I don't need it, but I want nice things!
I really enjoyed this story, a nice sized story, and aside from having to understand t-t-this k-k-kind o-o-of s-s-speach a smooth read and a nice one.
Keep it up
Eh, maybe it's just not that bad, or perhaps I'm feeling altruistic, but despite it being predictable and not having the best writing, I shall refrain from a Thumb Down. A step up from 90% of the stories I see, I assure you.
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I try to convey the speaking with that... I need to work on it I know, other than that, Thank you
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Well, at least it's not total utter crap like everything else then! lol. I'll take that over someone saying its total utter crap any day.
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It surprised me to see you comment here. But thanks for the comment, we're trying our best to improve.
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Good to hear.
3353560 not a problem, jst keep going
someone kind write all ready write a story just like this.
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I'm not sure I follow that... erm, Is there any way you might consider re-writing that or editing it or something... I don't mean to sound rude but I can't reply with a response good to that unless I can understand it better...
3359589 I'm pretty sure he meant someone wrote a story similar to this. I could be wrong but that's what I read.
cute little story full of twists and turns. great job.
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Yeah I dunno, lol.
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Thanks
I really liked this story. Very cute. I give you five out of five Pinkie's and Scootaloos
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I honestly don't know what to think of this story
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That's only 4 pinkies!
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Oh? Any particular reason why if I might ask?
3369388 I don't really know....
It was okay I guess...
Keep up the good work!
Your truly luck to have so many comments... My stories barely have any comments
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Well thank you then, yeah the only reason I have so many comments is because I have this story linked on my FA account
3370383 oh...
well its your choice but could you please read and comment on my fanfic prologue?
It would mean a lot to me, and trust me it wont take you more than 5 minutes. Here's the link http://www.fimfiction.net/story/137840/our-hero I'm, going to go ahead and follow you and read your other stories... Hope its worth it 
3370383 oh wait....you don't have any other stories... oops...
3369388 Are you sure?
I swear I count five every time I look.
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I do but they are all rated Mature so if you have the mature filter on you won't see them.
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You are correct.
3370397 Now I don't mean to sound like a jerk here... But this is hardly the place to be advertising your story
Your best bet would be posting it in The Shameless Self Promotion Bureau
That was really cute I like these kind of stories I discoverd and poor apple bloom at the ending now she know how it's like
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I'm sorry Dave I can't let you do that.
It's also incredibly rude to go to someone's story and demand it get longer.
Anyway I do have plans for a sequel to this story but its a long way off. I have other things to do. I do have open commission slots thought if someone wants a new story like this sooner.
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It's an expression.
I'm not a dude.
And what in Equestria are you talking about video?
Plus, requesting nicely, and being a total dick about trying to force an author to extend a story because You want it to is incredibly rude. I provide you all with a FREE service by posting stories here that I've written. (Well it wasn't free for the person who commissioned this one but you get the idea.) So It's incredibly rude, to demand FREE entertainment when I have a life and need to keep food on the table for myself.
Good Day
3949523 Hey man. The author's got control of the work, and if they don't want to extend the story, they don't have to. Try and respect what they want and don't want out of the story, okay?
That's pretty much my reactions throughout the story. Good work!
What did you mean by Sweetie Belle's plot?
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I'm afraid I don't understand the question.
You said and I quote: She said picking up a small arched block and placing it over the entrance acting as if nothing had happened trying to ignore the new weight around her plot.
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Plot = rear and/or butt. It's a pony term.