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Midnight Shadows


Been a member since 2012, never realized there was a bio line until the end of 2018, I TAKE WRITING COMMISSIONS! :D lol. I don't do roleplays.

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It would've been interesting if Midnight turned back into her adult self right at the end with the bullies still around.

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I was considering that when I wrote the end, but ultimately, It made for a cuter end the way I put it. I might do an alternate ending just because. lol.

Though I'm going to work on an idea for a story I had for Midnight and Clover for Hearths Warming Eve before I do an alt for this, I think I'm going to aim for cute....because who doesn't love cuteness in holiday stories? :twilightsmile:

Interesting. I like how you captured Midnight's conflict between between her OOC and IC roles. She looks like a foal but she's mentally an adult.

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Yeah, It was hard to capture her mind like that, I sometimes found myself writing her not acting then I had to go back and change it.....lets just say this story was trial and error, and a lot of it.

SO.....MUCH....DAWW! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: MORE!

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Well I'm in the middle of writing a special holiday story now so.......more to come.

Heh poor Midnight, having to go through that bullying. Was a cute story though, and I do look forward to seeing more stories like this int he future, if you plan on doing them :pinkiehappy:

Will that potion will be in more? I want you to use! :pinkiehappy:

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That potion will make another appearance. Yes.

1741657 Yeah and those bullies tied her up really good. I hope Amber managed to show them who's boss when he stood up for Midnight. :eeyup:

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