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Starlight after finding out about the lies Celestia hid from her. Starlight refuses to listen to anything she says this leads Celestia to resort to some drastic measures. Will Celestia get her loving daughter back or become the worlds worst mother ever?
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So,,what is Starlight? Pony version of Cthulhu? The pony Antichrist? What?
3840286 She is made of magic and such. It will all be explained soon
Not a lot to go on for the first chapter. Only time will tell how this turns out.
3840435 It shall all be explain in either the next chapter or 3rd one
3840435 Yea I have few things to fix as well
3840546 Told you all in the next or 3rd chapter :3
3840600 Fine fine I'll start writing the second chapter and it'll be done by the end of the weekend or you could find the piece that is gonna be part of the new story I am writing and I will just tell you.
3840698 I have an editor hes just not on skype at the moment XD
3840698 Also just find the part of the story that is gonna be part of my new/old story and I will tell you one thing that you want to know about this story
3840803 Nope its farther down in the story. It doesnt have anything related to the main plot but it seems like a plot all its own
3840819 Hes not on at all is what I mean.
3840831 Nope. Try again
3840852 Nope your too far back gotta go further to the end of the story :3
3840946 One of those choices is right I will say. Which one do you think?
3840969 The other one. Its kinda hard to recognize. If you have a skype my name is shaymin144 on skype if not just message me private message
3840989 You got facebook? I am Starlight Dash on facebook and yes Shaymin is my favorite pokemon I'll you a picture my OC of her after I explain the background to you.
3841003 Thats fine then
Your description should be easier to parse than this. Punctuation is your friend.
3841147 hold on a blog post is needed to explain this cause I cant keep telling ponies this. I never learned punctation.
3841153
Then either (A) start working with an editor who knows punctuation, or (B) stop writing.
3841161 Sorry for being blunt about it. It's just I am sick of being the one with the bad stories cause someone fucked up in my life and made me go to a bad school that was shutdown! Sorry I have an editor hes just not on right now.
I like it so far very well done can't wait till the next chapters come out :)
3841752 next one probably by the end of this weekend and 3rd whenever.
3842983 yay I can't wait :)
3843040 Yea I know I just really wish my editor was on right now
3843042 well I hope he does cuz I want more chapters :D if I could help u I would
3843267 He'll be on I'm sure if not I can find somepony else on short notice
I see you included Button's Mom in this. Well her cutie mark does seem to imply she's good with foals.
3845447 Yes I help manage a page of her on facebook which is why I called her Vanilla Mash
very sweet chapter :)
3847759 Thank you
3847793 :) welcome
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3882659 X3 I am working on it as I type this. I was temporarily unable to put one out due to certain altercations that occured
Super cute chapter well done :)
This is pretty cute. But I find it odd how Starlight went from hating Celestia to just accepting her. Especially since Celestia supposedly lied to her.
3904831 Thank you
3905767 It's gonna get better trust me. I can't spoil though
3908183 First all Starlight turns over a new leaf while in the daycare for a temporary time. This is why she isn't angry at Celestia right now. Two the Luna thing was a joke. Also I recommend a MAM pacifier they tend to have a bigger nipple. I suckle on it sometimes and I got both from the baby Aisle. Nuks are made for adults basically hence the larger nipple end. Also its a daycare for all ages. So there is a mixture of foals, filiies, and young incontinent ponies who cant take care of themselves.
I just got finished watching an episode of Doctor Who called love and monsters this that's really relate to this but just thought you all should know
I love this story
4352665 Thanks I am glad you do! I am going to be releasing pertaining to Starlight's background story soon. I have got an amazing idea and don't want to spoil it.
4384583
Oh you ruin all the fun don't you... is Alice here yet
4386604 Alice?
4386615
I don't know The Mad Hatter on Batman Markham city is obsessed with some girl named Alice
4386638 oh ok.
4386646
Is she?
4386648 Not sure never played or saw the game.