• Published 25th Jan 2014
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Starlight's Friendly Foal Daycare - Starlight Dash



Starlight after finding out about the lies Celestia hid from her refuses to listen to anything she says this leads Celestia to unleash her secret weapon.

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Starlight's Sleepover

Starlight's Friendly Foal Daycare
Starlight's Sleepover

Slowly after being out of the nursery Starlight began to hate her mother again. Her hatred grew bit by bit till it was almost back to normal.She held back a little for she did in a way help Starlight make a new friend. Which for Starlight was superb. Though constant years of diapering wearing and lies tend to outweigh a medium grade good deed. Starlight continued to ignore her mother and treat her like she did before only a slight bit less harsh. Her mother was able to get Sunshine's mother to allow a sleep over which was exciting. Starlight had spent the entire day reading up on social novels, biographies, poems. Anything she could use to increase her chances of not scaring away her only friend would help. Celestia pops her head into Starlight's room.

"Hey baby girl you all ready for tonight?"

Starlight responds not coldly, but more annoyed. "Yes mother I am fine. Please leave."

At that note Celestia left not pushing her luck any further. Starlight leaves the warm comfort of her bed and walks slowly onto the wet and cold balcony. Sometimes she thought the marble surface was cursed to trap the cold in it for whenever she was on this balcony Starlight had gotten cold hooves. As Starlight stood above Canterlot she noticed the small young filly that was walking up the path to the castle. It was Sunshine Rose. Starlight went back inside and magically closed the door behind her. She waited calmly though still excited on her bed. A few minutes later Starlight's mother opens the door and leads Sunshine in who had saddlebag on her back.

"Hey Rosy!"

"Hey Starlight!"

Celestia spoke up "I think I'll now."

"Yea I think that would be best."

With that hurtful comment Celestia exited the scene. Starlight turned to Rosy again and then noticed something she didn't before.

Starlight circles around her friend "Hey wheres your diaper?"

"Oh um. I don't always where them. I am a part time foalsitter so I don't have the time to wear them. Plus other ponies wouldn't want me to foalsit if I was acting as a foal myself."

"Oh.. I guess that's right. Ponies like me and you aren't exactly part of the normal pony society."

Rosy giggles "I guess we gotta make up our own society."

"Guess so."

All became quiet.

Starlight broke the silence "So what do you wanna do?"

"We can play truth or dare?"

"What's that?" Starlight asks.

"It's this game where you spin a bottle in a circle and whoever it lands on you have to dare them to do something or they have to tell the truth."

"Ok! Let's do it...right after I change."

After so is done Starlight sits down directly facing Sunshine.

"You ready? Or does the foal need a minute."

Starlight was a little taken off by the joke, but proceeded to play along "oh haha so hilarious I forgot to laugh."

Sunshine spins the bottle. Starlight watches the bottle spin in a clockwise manner till it lands on her.

"Now what?"

"Now you pick truth or dare."

"Dare!" Starlight shouts.

Sunshine giggles. "I dare you to get your mommy to do something babyish."

Starlight stops smiling. "NO! I hate her. This is a mommy free sleepover and that's how it's gonna stay!"

"Fine jeez didn't know you hated so much. Then you have to do something I say."

Sunshine thinks for a moment.

"You have to suckle your pacifier the rest of the night."

Starlight sticks her pacifier in her mouth. "Dweal!"

Celestia pops in. "Bed time girls."

"Ok Princess!"

"I'll go to bed when I want!"

Sunshine was little more shocked this time.

"Starlight that's your mom!"

"I don't care!"

Starlight not wanting to hear anymore hops into her bed and flings her head under her pillow.

"Wow um goodnight Starlight?"

Sunshine looks up at Celestia.

"Is she always like this?"

Celestia nods "It's been a rough few months."

Sunshine Rose taken aback gasps. "A few months?! That's horrible. That's no way to treat your own mother."

"I've tried to show her I am truly sorry, but she refuses to listen. She'll stay happy and content with me every now and then, but go straight back to hating me."

"You poor thing. She doesn't deserve you! Why don't you send her off someplace. Adopt a real daughter who appreciates you for who you are?! Like me!"

"Starlight told me you had a family."

"I lied... I didn't want to say something so painful."

"But then who was that pony I sent letters to before?"

"I-it was me." Tears began to form in Sunshines eyes.

Celestia began to feel bad for Sunshine and holds her close. "It's ok. sh sh... mommies here now."

Sunshine looks into Celestia's eyes and both glow slightly green for a few second before returning to normal.

"Why don't you come sleep with me tonight?"

"Otay!"

Sunshine follows Celestia off to her bedroom.

-The Next Day-

Starlight yawns and stretches. Immediately she became alarmed for she didn't feel the wood head board of her bed stopping her hooves. She didn't feel her pillow, blankets, or hear the plastic sheet crinkling below her. Starlight's eyes shoot open. She was in a small forest clearing surrounded by evil looking trees and plants. She was in the middle of the Everfree Forest.

Author's Note:

I know this part may lack some foalish factors and maybe the next chapter as well, but I swear it will continue. The daycare will come back and thing will get better.

Comments ( 14 )

Waking up in The Everfree Forest? What sort of trouble has Starlight gotten into?

4553389 You'll see ;) I got much planned and one of the best endings ever!

4557984 Yes about 4 or more chapters left don't worry.

4561339 Are we gonna see an update any time soon, or is this fic on hold?

5274738 I just havent seen much of point considering no one likes my stories so what point is there in getting my ideas and dreams out there?

5542968 You can't think like that. Just because some of your ideas haven't worked out doesn't mean people don't like them. It just means that you probably need to spend more polishing them, maybe even get an editor to help you improve on them.

And this fic currently has more thumbs up than thumbs down, so people seem to be okay with this one.

5543742 I may consider continuing not sure yet though.

Well I love the story but why would celestia drop her daughter in the everfree forest :rainbowhuh:

6095582 Its a place of deadly creatures and horrible nightmares where else would you leave something you dont want anymore?

6103031 it just seems like something either someone selfish or evil would do

I really like this story, I hope you continue it! :yay:

As a foal Starlight's opinion of Celestia is irrelevant. That's the main strength of it. Hating or loving her is taking out.
Also she shouldn't be allowed to say that she hates Celestia. I wasn't allowed to say that when I was a child either.

I like that you include discipline but sending Starlight alone in the forest like that was taking things WAY too far. Celestia doesn't seem to include any of the real techniques that I know she possesses.

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