Been a member since 2012, never realized there was a bio line until the end of 2018, I TAKE WRITING COMMISSIONS! :D lol. I don't do roleplays.
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Great so far
So good. It made me want to see the whole story in just 1 day. I saw the story when I was watching thediamondminecart and popularmmos. NIce.
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Yeah, it would be if the damn staff team hadn't changed the rating automatically without consent when it's in no way a damn fetish story.
Love it can't wait for more
6233765 Yeah, I mean, true, its part of the Padded Ponies group, but its quite innocent
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I agree, there is nothing mature about this story. ba-dum tish
I will still eagerly await the next regardless!
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The only thing vaguely mature would be in the next chapter. (The next chapter is sitting there unpublished, I want to finish the final chapter though before I publish the next chapter, midway through the final, hoping to finish it this week. :) ) And the line that I am referring to, Isn't even in the story, I was only going to put it in if it was deemed a 'mature' story. I'm in the process of appealing the story rating right now, if it doesn't get appealed I'll put in a single, one single line in regards to Candace and Shining Armour that's more of a passing joke than anything, but at least it'll constitute the rating right? Lol.
I am so glad this isn't a damn fetish story!
honestly i was hoping twilight would remember their future, but oh well, its still awesome and I like what you did with it and I cant wait to see the next chapter! :D
6236288 Seems like the moderator who 'approved' it is implying their own fetishes on it, because this isn't a damn fetish story, I still don't get the mature rating. It's good to see that atleast some people can see past that "M"
6236487 Well Twilight didn't go back in time, Only dash was sent through time, there is in fact, another rainbow dash running around in this time period right now.
6237897 Maybe it's because you make a brief reference to 'genitals', even though it was never in a sexual, creepy way.?
6237958 Really? Where? Lol, I don't remember writing that word in there anywhere. . . One of the comments from docs (Or suggestions rather) might have went through without me knowing. granted the mods words were "The story is rather fetishistic." So idk.
6238227 I really don't see much fetish stuff in here, i don't see anything that could relate to sex, except the offhand comment about Cadence and her magazine
6238247 Well. . . there might be a small statement that Twilight makes in the next chapter -? not sure if I kept it in or not- About the 'moaning monster from downstairs' that's 'only here when Cadance is here' Lol, I'm pretty sure I removed that though. But aside from offhand comments about Cadance, her magazine, and perhaps one or two references that make it out like Shining and Her had intimate relations. (Passing comments really not anything descriptive, thrown in for comic relief) I don't think there's anything fetishy. Just stuff thrown in for comic relief.
6238380 That's what i said, there's nothing 'cloppy' here.
6237899 oh wow
6238576 Yeah the 'real' rainbow dash, or rather the one who belongs in this time period is in Cloudsdale somewhere. She doesn't make an appearance but I believe there is mention of the thought that there is another Dash somewhere around.
Is it nearly over?
Will Dash ever see her mom one last time?
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Dash gets Twilight pregnant and we find out that Twilight is Dash's mom, that's why Dash never see's her mom again.
Just Kidding!
6270584 Nah Twi gets Dash pregnant and Dash ends up becoming her own mother, Philip Fry style.
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GG. GG. . . I've been beaten at my own game.
6271644 HUZZAH!
I'm lov'in it
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Thanks!
Shit's gettin' real, now. Dash’s dead mom? Twilight already kissing Rainbow? Rainbow being girly? Also, what's going to happen? There's no way it's almost over yet. I feeling like this is going to be longer than most would anticipate. Have a like and a fav as well as a tracking.
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Again, Lol, I refer you and everyone else to this image.
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Jesus I just started reading the story and it already makes me go "OH MY GOD" was not expecting how horny this story gets so quickly. Not to mention when rainbow say she doesn't won't Cadence
to see the second liquid in her diaper took me a little bit to realize what she meant by that.
I'm glad twilight isn't older to understand what dash was saying
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Well when the story was forced to go to a mature rating, we decided to leave it as is and not cut anything out so yeah lol. You'll have things like that.
Subtle jabs at erotic subjects that Twilight is oblivious to. Makes for all of the lols.
Adorable levels are passing 'Diabetes inducing'...
My Goddess, it's over 9,000!
6542780 Thanks :)
I'm not really much for stuff like this, but for some reason, this story really caught my interest. Good work.
6631783 Thank you!
Plz more Midnight!!!
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FFFFFFFFFFFFF, I forgot about this story because of Christmas >.>
It'll be done soon!
I love how this ended, can't wait to see what new chapters come for your other stories
6853262 Thank you! Stay tuned! There's lots more where that came from! 2016 is going to be a productive year I think!
6853303 I love your work, you're one of my favorite padded pony authors
6853335 Hehe thank you! You're too kind!
6853394 It was nothing, just giving props to a good writer
I found what you r missing
Smiling, the purple unicorn filly replied, “That I’m not just a regular old unicorn?” She
“That’s right, you’re anything but.” The pink alicorn said, nuzzling the top of Twilight’s head.
You have grammar mistake lol
6854395 Fixed, Thank you for showing me that error!
Edit*: I've also upvoted your comment, I dunno who downvoted you, but I don't want to discourage people from pointing out errors, Critiques and small error spotting is a + for me, It makes me a better writer when people show me my mistakes.
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Satisfied with the ending? I'm dying to know! :P lol
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