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Not bad, but I think this could've just been a one-shot. Still, it was a sweet little story. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks :eeyup:

It almost was a one-shot. I decided to organize it the way it is now partially because of tone change towards the end, plus each part is kinda its own thing.

Why the story is M? There is something bad in the story, or just moderation request because its a diaper story?

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The Pajama Party's themes required I bump it up to Mature before it could be accepted. To be safe I did that here as well, seeing how both stories contain themes of bed-wetting and diapers.

Comment posted by Key Tapper deleted Aug 27th, 2016

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No clue. Urban Dictionary says it's a way of expressing emotion, might have something to do with Game of Thrones. Don't watch the show.

If people're having good fun or trying to say something about the story, that's cool. Please don't spam though.

Peace :eeyup:

7515099 yeah any diaper story I've every had moderated had had to be teen cause I think fetidh territory or something. It just the posting standards on things. No exert though

This was a nice read, I hope there would be more of this story again.

I was starting to get into it, waiting for things to develop or for Button to realize what she was wearing or... Anything, really. And then it just stopped. I feel like I've read half a story. It's a decent half of a story, even if the last chapter's developments feel rushed and unsatisfying, for what it's worth. The first three chapters were good, at least.

He'd gotten a score of over 9,000 in one of the first video games he'd played wearing it (the one, he said, using terms Rarity couldn't recall, where the characters all turned blonde when they achieved their "final form" which, as it turns out, was never truly final). For that reason they were inseparable.
Dragonball Z reference lol &:facehoof:

An enjoyable sequel, good job! :twilightsmile:

I'm glad you made a sequel to better flesh out Sweetie's situation. Seeing how Rarity would handle such a situation compared to Applejack was definitely enjoyable to discover.

What I really loved was how much you presented Rarity as a caring, older sister. One who really does look out for Sweetie. It adds a lot more umph to what we saw in "For Whom The Sweetie Belle Toils" and "Forever Filly".

It truly is a labor of love to find ways to help someone cope with a condition or situation they never asked for. The two tales you developed definitely would make great reads for youngsters and their parents who want to help assure that it is just a phase which can be managed. Taking the fear and shame from such a situation certainly allows for the focus on the happy things in life instead of the dread of the condition ruining everything. :)

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Thank you very much for the kind words.

I wrote both stories with kind of an idealized take on how to deal with the issue of bed-wetting, along with hopes being a bit realistic... medication doesn't work for everyone, for example, and can get frustrating. I know that, for children of all ages , the idea of bed-wetting and wearing diapers again to combat that condition, can be shameful and even isolating, so I wrote both stories with the idea of hopefully conveying the characters rising above the problem, becoming closer and more understanding as a result.

I believe you did an amazing job in being positive and objective in your stories. Having two helps a lot in how it presents how there is more than one way to handle an issue that is out of your control that can be a cause for shame and self loathing.

The best part is how you showed how trust and support play a big role in such matters. You also were genuine in how such an issue takes time to work through. Patience by the one in the situation and those closest to him or her is extremely important.

I've spent quite a long time trying to figure out how events in our childhoods can imprint either positively or negatively upon us as we grow older. It's truly profound how a traumatic life event, like bedwetting, could either scar someone or be nothing more than a bad memory that more instills knowledge that it wasn't anything to be ashamed of.

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Thanks for the kind words.

For the time being I must decline offers to collaborate, though that may change in the future.

Sorry about the lateness of my reply :eeyup:

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