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really pretty good story dude
Shire-Frodo. With those words, my composure shattered into five straight minutes of laughter.
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Hehe, awesome. I almost edited that part out
Your doing good at summing things up but you could go into detail and not in the clop but like what is there surroundings per say.like gummy you told very little of him be more specific.also try and write a little about whats going on outside the building.
Overall its good just a few things could be better
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Thank you for your critique
It's been a difficulty for me to describe things in too detail (within certain situations) without making the story drag. I spend a lot of time in the editing phase trying to compromise. Good to know I'm not imagining things... It's something I'm working on improving
Take it easy, pardner
wait , how does infantilisim factor into a fic that sounds like it's going the watersports route?....
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The fic has more than one element in it, but watersports could be added all the same depending on how a person looks at it.
3834457 ok so how does infantilisim develop this?...
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Thought I made it pretty clear in the story. Well, infantilism doesn't develop it, but it's an element in the story all the same. If you wish to continue discussing this, feel free to PM me.
Take it easy
3835492 i hadn't read the story yet that's why i was asking.....
I'm really enjoying this story. It took three chapters to get to the part I was interested in, but I wasn't bored at any moment.
The characters are believable and the flow feels natural, not a common thing for thees kind of stories.
Good job
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Thank you, that is quite a compliment
Why do I have a feeling that AJ's gonna have a stick up her ass about Pinkie being an adult foal?
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Hehe, it is possible
I always liked your icon, btw
sweet,hahaha
15 bits is a few weeks savings and gets 5 mugs? Isn't she a manager!?
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Good point. I was wondering if that would scale right while writing the story. I'll consider changing that up some to make more logical sense
Thanks for pointing that out
Good chapter but for me AJ ruined it I like it better when it was pinkie pie an rainbow dash but thats me
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Thanks for the kind words, pardner
I hesitated a lil bit about having AJ present for these parts because I was afraid she might throw off the fun dynamic a bit. I had a blast thinking up the somewhat random, fun things for the mares to do before she showed up
That said, I have something in mind for this story, but, truly... was there ever any doubt?
Sorry, couldn't resist ^^
Take it easy :)
I love this story hope there is a minimum of 20 chapters still to come i love the whole loving parent like approach its cute. As appose to humiliation aspect of babying. Its cute boarder line sexy. Its not the scenes are sexy because of the diapers but they are simply sexy and have diapers does that make sense?
not bad at all
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Thanks for the kind words, it's been fun to write. It doesn't have twenty chapters to go, but its got a little while yet
I don't quite understand what you mean by parent-aspect of babying, but thanks all the same.
I think the term you're searching for may be erotic, though that might be a bit too strong.
Peace
3940953 What I meant by it was it was more a Loving Character than, "Look at the big baby, ahh is the wittle baby gonna cry now, what would the others think if they saw you like this" kinda things basically, your story yeah they jab here and there, but they aren't hurtful. take this example, if zecora found applebloom wanting the "baby" treatment, chances are she'd be a loving parent type, but replace zecora with diamond tiara she'd be hateful and humiliating. does that make more sense?
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Yush. I understand now.
Is this story going to be completed? Best diaper fic I've read in a while.
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Heh, glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the interest
Completing One Stormy Afternoon is fairly high on my list of things to do for this site. The next part is in the editing stages. I've taken a week or so off from writing fan fiction, but pretty soon I'll resume.
I normally don't do this, but since you're enjoying this fic (and this is on my page), I've also written two others stories involving diapers -- "Obsession and Regression" and"Pajama Party". They're different from this; check 'em out if you're interested.
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Actually I've already read both of those, obsession and regression was great, it was interesting, well written, and I just generally wanted to read on.
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I dig. Thanks again
"Really? Et tu, Pinkie?" LOL Cesaer reference.
this is fun, i like this
All i can say is how interesting this is!
its weird... i like the story a lot... but all that i can think about is blunderlane getting chewed out for being a vainglorious dork.
CHEW HIM OUT LIKE BAZOOKA BUBBLE GUM IN WINTER!!!
I WANT HIM TO RUE THE DAY
(i deal with a lot of dumb stuff at work... I need this)
Love this story keep up the good work :)
I still think applejack ruins the story but that my opinion lol
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Blunderlane... I like that.
(i deal with a lot of dumb stuff at work... I need this)
Hehe. I know what ya mean. Don't worry... I have plans for this "Blunderlane" of which you speak
what? that part with Luna what?
daww, nice
I really don't want to say this, but I feel like I should give an honest review. It is actually rare for me to comment on a story, but this seems important to me.
For one thing: I DID enjoy it up until the whole "it was a dream" thing was spilled on us. After spending a couple hours reading into the first few chapters, that was disappointing to say the least. That, for me, made the whole night of them having fun with love, forgiveness, cuddling, fear, trust, etc. all seemed wasted. If the story ended with them, saying, sleeping in each other's arms after Rainbow was done in between Applejack's legs, that would have been fine. The last chapters were good, and the ending was nice, but I feel like they were only there to justify the story of being a dream (that could be my denseness speaking).
Overall, it was a good story and was well written (just take note that it is 'Applejack', not 'Apple Jack'). I do not appreciate the slap in the face though.
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Thanks for taking the time to write a review.
I did not intend to insult or disappoint the audience with this story or the ending, but rather spin a fun yarn with an ending full of uncertainty. I'm glad you overall enjoyed it and will keep in mind what you've told me about Applejack for future stories.
Peace
Good sir you forget yourself!
Do not laugh in your own home!
I laughed for ten minutes
First of all
blerrrggg that wetting scene was a bit graphic
Second of all you get five out of five faces
This remindes me of fluttercrinckle
4553872 well this is a AB/DL story
4046982 i liked pajama party that tuched me and this one is realy good so far and ill cheak out the other one
5896095 dude wa
so sweat
this was good
5896384 AB/DL stands for adult babty diaper lover http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paraphilic_infantilism
5896934 no shit Sherlock I was just playin with ya,