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Like many siblings, Rumble and Thunderlane don't always get along. The age gap and personality differences often leads to heated arguments that leave both ponies frustrated. With the help of a mysterious book, found in the library of Twilight Sparkle's castle, Rumble takes the situation in his own hooves and devises a plan to reverse roles with his older brother.

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(Do not continue reading if you do not approve of hypnosis, diaper usage, mental regression, or adult baby themes. If you do not like it or are under legal age, please do not keep reading.)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 27 )

Great to see this starting to post, can't wait to see more! Oh yes, this is gonna be good.

great a diaper story staring Rumble and Thunderlane, this is the best. I can't wait to see how this going to unfold. I hope Rumble is going to have a lot of fun with this.

great this is going even better then what I thought it would be I can imagine that Rumble adding more and more suggestions that would make him act like a baby without realizing it that is all in his subconsciouses, all the wail he keep all hims mental faculties. I don't think it would be good if that Rumble could strait up make his brother do what he wants, but I think that he could implant the suggestion that Thundrerlane sees him as some one how is bigger than he is and would be easier to cow into compliance. I can't wait to see what comes next. :pinkiehappy:

great chapter, I was hopping that Rumble would let his brother stew a few day in his accidents, before using more hypnoses, but this is still fun. Can't wait to see the next chapter

finally we are getting it into the good stuff. now that Thunderlane is into diapers and has yet to get used to it, I wander if he will also do number two eventually. what will be Rumble's next step to this socking his hoof, pacifier, onesses?

Loving it, hehe, can't wait for the next chapter.

It's kinda cool to see rumble take control of thunderlane. Plz keep up the good work:pinkiesmile:

Can you please keep this fic alive. It's really good

Great chapter again, but I was wandering why Rumble didn't used Thunderlane to do his chores that he is supposed to do any way?seen he can dominate him with with his big brother routine. Also what happened to the Winter Morning Project, I was really looking forward in seeing it.

6820579 I will be making a blog post about the project soon. Unfortunately it will have to be put on hiatus.

Now this is getting...interesting.

I have a feeling Rumble's use of hypnosis will come back to haunt him later,

I have a dream, that one day, this fic might one day be finished

So now Rumble has Thunderlane regressed to the point where he's going to be babysat by the Cloud twins? That should be interesting.

This was a great story the hole way, I am just sad that it all end there. oh well at least I know that that your stories alway get better and better as it gos along. I am looking forward to see more of your work:pinkiehappy:

Here's to hoping for a sequel! If it does happen I am hoping there's a subplot of Twilight trying to find the hypnosis book and finding what Rumble did. Maybe even have Rumble hypnotise Twilight to making a public decree to treat Thunderlane like a little colt.

Apart of me was hoping Thunder would run home crying and then Rumble would feel guilty.

But I still loved it either way. Great job! :twilightsmile:

“Begging, huh?” Cloudchaser laughed, completely convinced, “well just hope the baby’s diaper doesn’t leak and ruin his new clothes.”
Thunderlane let out a fussy sound as he pouted a tiny bit at the teasing. It’s not like he actually WANTED to wear this stupid costume.

This set of lines is done twice.

7108178 Whoops. Good catch. Must have been a side effect of transplanting sections of new text from one source to another. Thank you for pointing it out.

awesome chapter, Thunder Lane is progressing better than I had expected, he is acting more and more like a foal but he is still clinging to his adult personal, so he keep regressing and is still embarrassed of his diapers need. I like the idea of how Cloud Kicker and Flitter are now involved in the conditioning of Rumbles Brother and add a delicious flavor to the story. Genies, all of it

Is there a possibility for another chapter?

Please tell me there's gonna be a sequel!

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